Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlamalar var. Daha təbii və qısa ifadələrdən istifadə edin, məsələn, mənsubiyyət və zaman formalarını düzgün tətbiq edin.

例: I have looked up the meaning of my name several times. It doesn't have a special meaning, but it means 'wife of the King.'

提案: Cavabınızda çoxlu 'uh' və 'umm' kimi sözlər var, bu, təbii danışığı azaldır. Daha aydın və qısa cümlələr qurmağa çalışın.

例: I would choose unusual and interesting names for my children because old-fashioned names sometimes sound outdated.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər var və cümlələr bir az qarışıqdır. Daha sadə və düzgün quruluşlu cümlələr istifadə edin.

例: Yes, I share my name with my grandmother, my father's mother. My dad chose to give me her name.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha aydın və qısa ifadələrdən istifadə edin və əlaqələndirici sözlər əlavə edin.

例: Yes, there are differences. In the past, people preferred traditional names, but now many modern families choose unique and interesting names.

提案: Cümlənizdə məna aydın deyil və 'synapses' sözü səhv istifadə olunub. Daha dəqiq və uyğun sözlər seçin və nümunəni aydın ifadə edin.

例: Yes, some names are very popular in China. For example, in my classroom, there are three students with the same name.

× Actually, I have searched so many times the meaning of my name and I found that no, it hasn't have a special meaning, but my the meaning of my name is the wife of King and that's all.

✓ Actually, I have searched many times for the meaning of my name and I found that no, it doesn't have a special meaning, but the meaning of my name is the wife of a king and that's all.

The modal verb 'hasn't have' is incorrect; it should be 'doesn't have' to agree with the present simple tense and third person singular subject. Also, 'so many times' is better as 'many times' in this context, and 'searched the meaning' requires the preposition 'for'. 'My the meaning' is incorrect; it should be 'the meaning'. 'Wife of King' needs an article 'a' before 'king'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Actually, I have searched so many times the meaning of my name and I found that no, it hasn't have a special meaning, but my the meaning of my name is the wife of King and that's all.

✓ Actually, I have searched many times for the meaning of my name and I found that no, it doesn't have a special meaning, but the meaning of my name is the wife of a king and that's all.

The verb 'searched' requires the preposition 'for' when indicating what is being searched. Omitting 'for' before 'the meaning' is incorrect. Adding 'for' clarifies the object of the search.

× Uh, I would choose something unusual and interesting for my future children. Like, I don't think I will put umm, old names, uh, to my, uh, children because uh, sometimes they sound quite different, that's why.

✓ Uh, I would choose something unusual and interesting for my future children. Like, I don't think I will give old names to my children because sometimes they sound quite different, that's why.

The phrase 'put old names to my children' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'give' when referring to naming children. Also, unnecessary fillers like 'umm' and 'uh' are omitted for clarity. The modal verb usage 'would choose' and 'will give' is appropriate here.

× Yes, my name comes from my grandmother who is my dad's mother and we have the same names and my dad preferred to put that name to me.

✓ Yes, my name comes from my grandmother who is my dad's mother and we have the same name and my dad preferred to give me that name.

The phrase 'we have the same names' should be 'we have the same name' because 'name' is singular when shared. Also, 'put that name to me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'give me that name' when referring to naming someone.

× Actually I can say yes. In the past people usually prefer to put something old fashioned names or traditional names, but now usually modern special modern families put something interesting and unique name to their children.

✓ Actually, I can say yes. In the past, people usually preferred to give old-fashioned or traditional names, but now modern families usually give interesting and unique names to their children.

The phrase 'something old fashioned names' is incorrect because 'something' is singular and 'names' is plural; they do not agree. It should be 'old-fashioned or traditional names' without 'something'. Also, 'put' is incorrect when referring to naming; 'give' is appropriate. Repetition of 'modern' is removed for clarity.

× There are quite a lot of names that are very popular in my country and you can see like lots of that name in one place. For example, in my classroom we have 3 synapses.

✓ There are quite a lot of names that are very popular in my country and you can see lots of those names in one place. For example, in my classroom we have 3 students with the same name.

The phrase 'lots of that name' is incorrect because 'that' is singular and 'lots' implies plural; it should be 'lots of those names'. Also, 'synapses' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'students' or 'people' sharing the same name. Correcting these improves meaning and grammatical accuracy.