Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, say "Yes, my name has a special meaning. It means peace, and it is important to me because my parents gave it to me on my birthday."

例: Yes, my name has a special meaning. It means peace, and it is important to me because my parents gave it to me on my birthday.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words and complete sentences to express your opinion clearly. For example, "In my opinion, when choosing names for the next generation, people often search online for short and meaningful names."

例: In my opinion, when choosing names for the next generation, people often search online for short and meaningful names.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to say clearly and avoid repeating words. For example, "Yes, my cousin and I have the same name, and it has the same meaning."

例: Yes, my cousin and I have the same name, and it has the same meaning.

提案: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. To answer negatively, say "No, there are no differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past." Also, you can add a reason or example to enrich your answer.

例: No, there are no differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past because traditional values still influence naming choices.

提案: Your answer lacks specificity and relevance. The names you mentioned are not typical Chinese names. Try to mention popular Chinese names and explain briefly. For example, "Yes, some names like Wei, Li, and Mei are very popular in China because they have positive meanings."

例: Yes, some names like Wei, Li, and Mei are very popular in China because they have positive meanings.

× Yes, my name have a special meaning.

✓ Yes, my name has a special meaning.

The subject 'name' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× The meaning of my name is peace and it is also important for me because it gives by my parents on my birthday.

✓ The meaning of my name is peace and it is also important to me because it was given by my parents on my birthday.

The sentence has incorrect passive voice and missing auxiliary verb 'was' before 'given'. Also, 'important for me' should be 'important to me'. This is a sentence structure error involving passive voice and preposition use.

× According to my opinion, now we will choose name.

✓ In my opinion, we will choose a name now.

The phrase 'According to my opinion' is incorrect; 'In my opinion' is the correct expression. Also, 'choose name' needs an article 'a' before 'name'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs reordering.

× Choose a name for next generation online like they will find it online some short names.

✓ We will choose a name for the next generation online, like finding some short names online.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes my cousin and mine name as name names are same and it has the same same meaning.

✓ Yes, my cousin's and my names are the same and they have the same meaning.

The sentence has singular/plural confusion and incorrect possessive forms. 'Mine name as name names' is incorrect; it should be 'my cousin's and my names'. Also, 'it has' should be 'they have' to agree with plural 'names'.

× No, there are any differences between Chinese name their children now and in the past.

✓ No, there are no differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past.

The sentence is missing 'no' after 'are' to negate properly. Also, 'Chinese name their children' needs 'how' to be grammatically correct.

× I think there are many popular names that I had heard like Christy, Rowena, Kim, Kate.

✓ I think there are many popular names that I have heard, like Christy, Rowena, Kim, and Kate.

The past perfect tense 'had heard' is incorrect here; present perfect 'have heard' fits better. Also, a comma is needed before 'like' and before 'and' in the list for clarity.