Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复词汇“let let let”，影响流畅性。建议避免重复，表达更自然。可以简洁说明父母请算命先生取名。

例: No, my parents asked a fortune teller to choose a name for me.

提案: 回答较好，但“you know”口语化且略显多余。建议去掉口语填充词，句子更简洁自然。

例: I would choose names from traditional Chinese poems because they have beautiful and profound meanings.

提案: 表达有些夸张且不够自然。建议直接回答并简洁说明名字独特性，避免绝对化表达。

例: No, I don't share my name with anyone in my family. I believe my name is quite unique.

提案: 句子结构不够完整，缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明差异。

例: Yes, in the past, Chinese names tended to be strong and patriotic, but nowadays, people often choose names that sound beautiful.

提案: 回答较好，但“regardless of the gender”表达稍显生硬。建议用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, recently, the name Zhi Han has become popular among both boys and girls in China.

× Actually no, my parents just found a person who could predict the fortune and let let let him to give a name for me.

✓ Actually no, my parents just found a person who could predict the fortune and let him give a name for me.

句中“let”后面不应该加“to”，动词不定式to give用法错误，正确用法是“let + 宾语 + 动词原形”。

× I will choose their names from traditional Chinese poems because, you know, the traditional Chinese poetry has beautiful and profound meaning, so I think it's worthwhile to.

✓ I will choose their names from traditional Chinese poems because, you know, traditional Chinese poetry has beautiful and profound meanings, so I think it's worthwhile.

“meaning”应使用复数形式“meanings”，因为诗歌通常包含多重含义；句末“worthwhile to”不完整，应去掉“to”。

× No, and to be more specific, I have the most unique name in the world because I think no one has the same name like me.

✓ No, and to be more specific, I have the most unique name in the world because I think no one has the same name as me.

“like”用于比较时不适合用于“same”，应使用介词“as”表示“和我一样”。

× Yes, in the past their names prone to be strong, like contributing to the country, but now people often choose some beautiful names.

✓ Yes, in the past their names were prone to be strong, like contributing to the country, but now people often choose some beautiful names.

缺少动词“were”，导致句子结构错误；“prone”后应接“to be”，表示倾向于。

× Yes, in the past their names prone to be strong, like contributing to the country, but now people often choose some beautiful names.

✓ Yes, in the past their names were prone to be strong, like contributing to the country, but now people often choose some beautiful names.

描述过去的情况时，动词应使用过去时态“were”，以保持时态一致。

× Yes, recently Zhi Han has become a popular name in China. Regardless of the gender, a lot of children have such names.

✓ Yes, recently Zhi Han has become a popular name in China. Regardless of gender, many children have this name.

“Regardless of the gender”中“the”不必要，应去掉；“a lot of children have such names”中“such names”应改为单数“this name”，因为前文指的是一个具体名字。