Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Старайтесь избегать повторений и лишних слов, таких как 'uh'. Также улучшите грамматику, например, используйте 'my name has' вместо 'my name have'. Попробуйте сделать ответ более связным и естественным.

例: Yes, my name has a special meaning in Arabic; it means 'queen' and symbolizes celebration or majority.

提案: Избегайте повторений, например, 'how how'. Используйте правильные времена, например, 'I have already chosen'. Сделайте ответ более структурированным и логичным, используя связующие слова.

例: I have already chosen a name for my first child. However, if it's a boy, I am not sure how I will choose the name because I want it to have a special meaning. I think my husband and I will decide together.

提案: Избегайте повторений, например, 'with with with'. Используйте правильные конструкции, например, 'I have never heard or seen'. Сделайте ответ более плавным и естественным.

例: No, I am the first in my family with this name, and I have never heard or seen anyone my age with the same name.

提案: Используйте правильные грамматические формы, например, 'name' вместо 'name'. Избегайте незавершённых предложений. Сделайте ответ более связным и логичным с помощью связующих слов.

例: I think there is no difference between how Chinese name their children now and in the past because they value traditions and continue to follow them when choosing names.

提案: Избегайте неполных предложений и уточняйте мысли. Используйте более точную лексику и структуру предложения.

例: I'm not quite sure which names are the most popular in China, but I know that many people choose names because they have special meanings.

× my name have a special meaning in Arabic language

✓ my name has a special meaning in Arabic language

The subject 'my name' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.

× I already choose one name for my first kid

✓ I already chose one name for my first kid

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense 'chose' instead of the present tense 'choose'.

× If my kid will be a boy, I don't know how how I will choose names

✓ If my kid is a boy, I don't know how I will choose names

In conditional sentences referring to the future, the 'if' clause should use the present tense ('is') instead of 'will be'.

× it's I want to give a special name with special meaning

✓ I want to give a special name with a special meaning

The phrase 'it's I want' is incorrect; it should be simply 'I want'. Also, 'a special meaning' needs the article 'a'.

× But I think it's gonna be with my husband

✓ But I think it will be with my husband

The informal contraction 'gonna' should be replaced with 'will' for proper modal verb usage.

× No, I'm the first who has this name

✓ No, I'm the first person who has this name

The phrase 'the first who has' is incomplete; adding 'person' clarifies the subject and improves grammar.

× and also I never heard or and never seen a person my age with with with my name

✓ and also I have never heard or seen a person my age with my name

The verbs 'heard' and 'seen' require the present perfect tense 'have never heard' and 'have never seen' to indicate experience up to now.

× I think there's no difference between how Chinese name their children now and in the past

✓ I think there's no difference between how Chinese name their children now and in the past

The verb 'name' should be 'name' as it is correct for plural subject 'Chinese' here; no correction needed.

× they keep it so they. Keeping giving their names

✓ they keep it, so they keep giving their names

The phrase 'Keeping giving' is incorrect; it should be 'keep giving' to maintain parallel verb structure.

× many people choose, namely because it has a special meaning

✓ many people choose it, namely because it has a special meaning

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'choose' to clarify what is chosen.