Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较长且结构不够清晰，缺少适当的连接词，表达有些重复。建议简化句子，明确主题句，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, my name has a special meaning. It symbolizes bright happiness, health, and success, reflecting my parents' hopes for my future career and academic achievements.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构稍显重复，缺少连接词。建议使用连接词连接观点和理由，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I would choose unique and meaningful names that represent intelligence, success, and health because I want my children's names to stand out and reflect my hopes for their bright future.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，句子不连贯。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用正确的语法结构表达观点。

例: No, my name is unique in my family. My parents wanted me to have a special identity, which shows their love and care for me.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少结尾和具体细节。建议补充完整句子，增加具体对比细节，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

例: Yes, there are differences. In the past, Chinese people often chose traditional names passed down through generations, usually with lucky meanings. Nowadays, parents prefer more modern and unique names.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意语法，明确表达观点并补充具体例子。

例: Yes, some names are more popular in China. For example, names that mean love, success, intelligence, and wisdom are common because they reflect parents' wishes for their children's success.

× Yes, my parents gave me a very unique and attractive name which has the meaning of bright happiness, health and success in our country and they hope for me to have a successful career and academic achievement so they gave me the name it symbolize their love and care for my personal.

✓ Yes, my parents gave me a very unique and attractive name which has the meaning of bright happiness, health, and success in our country, and they hope for me to have a successful career and academic achievements, so they gave me the name that symbolizes their love and care for me personally.

句中“academic achievement”应为复数形式“academic achievements”，因为通常指多个成就；“it symbolize”主语是单数“name”，动词应为第三人称单数“symbolizes”；“for my personal”表达不完整，应改为“for me personally”以符合习惯用法。

× I may choose some unique and attractive name which holds the meaning of like Bright intelligence, success, health because I want to make my children's names stand out and personalized.

✓ I may choose some unique and attractive names which hold meanings like bright intelligence, success, and health because I want to make my children's names stand out and be personalized.

“some unique and attractive name”中“name”应为复数“names”，因为前面用了“some”；“holds the meaning”应改为“hold meanings”，与复数主语一致；“like Bright intelligence”中“Bright”不应大写，且应加逗号分隔。

× No my name is the unique is unique and no one have the same name as you because my parents just want me to have the unique identity and the status in the family and it shows their love and care.

✓ No, my name is unique and no one has the same name as me because my parents just want me to have a unique identity and status in the family, and it shows their love and care.

“the unique is unique”重复且语法错误，应删去多余部分；“no one have”主语为单数，动词应为“has”；“same name as you”应为“same name as me”，因为说话者指自己；“the unique identity”中“the”应去掉，改为“a unique identity”。

× Also I feel value the and they just give it a unique name which I come with my.

✓ Also, I feel valued, and they just gave me a unique name which I carry with me.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且“feel value”应为“feel valued”；“give it a unique name which I come with my”表达不清，应改为“gave me a unique name which I carry with me”。

× In the past, many people choose their children's name by choosing the cultural traditional names and that passed on through their family history and generation.

✓ In the past, many people chose their children's names by choosing cultural traditional names that were passed on through their family history and generations.

“choose”时态应为过去式“chose”；“children's name”应为复数“children's names”；“that passed on”缺少被动语态，应为“that were passed on”；“generation”应为复数“generations”。

× Yes, there are some names are popular than others, such as some character which convey the meaning of love, success, intelligence, smart and wisdom.

✓ Yes, some names are more popular than others, such as some characters which convey the meanings of love, success, intelligence, smartness, and wisdom.

“there are some names are popular”结构重复，应删去“there are”；“some character”应为复数“some characters”；“convey the meaning”应为复数“convey the meanings”；“smart”作为名词不合适，应改为“smartness”。

× These are more popular because this name whole symbolize the wish of parents for their children to be a more successful people and have a.

✓ These are more popular because these names wholly symbolize the wishes of parents for their children to be more successful people and have a good life.

“this name”应为复数“these names”与前文呼应；“whole symbolize”应为副词“wholly symbolize”；“wish”应为复数“wishes”；“a more successful people”中“people”是复数，前面不应加冠词“a”；句尾不完整，补充“have a good life”。