Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific supporting details using proper linking words. Avoid redundancy and aim for natural English expressions.

例: My name was given by my father's friend, and I was told it means "ray of sunlight." However, I'm not completely sure about its exact meaning.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid vague phrases and improve vocabulary usage.

例: For my children, I would choose modern names rather than traditional ones because I believe modern names are more unique and meaningful in today's world.

提案: Your response is confusing and incomplete. Provide a direct answer first, then add specific details to clarify. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid grammatical errors.

例: No one in my family has the same name as me. My name was chosen based on my father's first name, but it is not very common in my family.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence, then explain differences with specific examples, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Nowadays, Chinese parents tend to choose modern and easy-to-pronounce names, whereas in the past, names were longer and had deeper meanings, which made them harder to pronounce.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific examples. Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific popular names and explain why they are favored, using appropriate vocabulary and linking words.

例: Yes, some names are more popular in China because they carry cultural significance. For instance, the name "Wei" is common because it symbolizes power and beauty, which many parents appreciate.

× I don't know I'm never source of my name of meaning because it's give my father's roommate so it's someone said told me someone asked for me to what's your name meanings of word I I they say the ray ray of the sunlight. I don't know what is this?

✓ I don't know the source of the meaning of my name because it was given by my father's roommate. Someone told me that when someone asked me about the meaning of my name, they said it means 'ray of the sunlight.' I don't know what this means.

The original sentence misuses prepositions such as 'of' and 'for' and has unclear phrasing. Correct prepositions are needed to express possession and origin, such as 'source of the meaning' and 'given by.' Also, the sentence structure was confusing and needed rephrasing for clarity.

× I would like to choose name as our first names with Starbucks. I don't wanna go or traditional any any kind of like old name. I'll give them a a modern name with our name, with our world to join their name. That's all.

✓ I would like to choose names like our first names with Starbucks. I don't want to choose traditional or any kind of old name. I'll give them a modern name combined with our names or words. That's all.

The original sentence incorrectly uses quantifiers and articles, such as 'name' instead of 'names' and 'any any kind of like old name.' Correct quantifiers and plural forms are necessary to express the intended meaning clearly.

× No, in my family have a name as my same as my 'cause it's a choose from my father's first name. So it's not a same as my previous generation. It's a my name is not quite popular but.

✓ No, in my family, no one has the same name as me because it was chosen from my father's first name. So, it is not the same as my previous generation. My name is not very popular though.

The original sentence has singular and plural errors such as 'have a name as my same as my' and missing subjects. Correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms are needed for clarity.

× Now is their name is more modern and we we expel them to easily in the past, We never it's the meaning of that name. It's a background of that name. So it's a long and difficult also pronounce. Yeah, of course in the future they will definitely change their name.

✓ Now, their names are more modern and easier for us to pronounce. In the past, we never knew the meaning or background of the names. They were long and difficult to pronounce. Of course, in the future, they will definitely change their naming style.

The original sentence misuses pronouns such as 'we we expel them to easily' and unclear references. Correct pronouns and clearer phrasing improve understanding.

× Yeah, in China, so our names are more popular than other do culture significant value. For example, why is a why is are very common because they have a carrier and beauty so many people like.

✓ Yes, in China, some names are more popular than others because they have significant cultural value. For example, the name 'Wei' is very common because it represents career and beauty, so many people like it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses quantifiers and articles, such as 'other do culture significant value' and 'why is a why is are.' Correct quantifiers and clearer sentence structure are necessary for proper meaning.