Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify the meaning of your name with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Actually, I have never thought much about the meaning of my name. My name, Scherma, is a common Islamic girl's name. As far as I know, it means 'coal' or 'light' in Bengali.

提案: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I think choosing a name is very important because it represents a person's identity. Therefore, I would choose meaningful Islamic names for my children to reflect our culture and values.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to make your answer smoother.

例: No, nobody in my family has the same name as me. My name is quite uncommon, and I have never met anyone else with it. It is a very rare name nowadays.

提案: Your answer is unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to compare past and present naming trends.

例: Yes, I believe there are differences. Nowadays, people prefer to give their children meaningful names. However, in the past, they often named children after natural elements like rivers or flowers.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your lack of knowledge politely and clearly. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition.

例: I'm sorry, but I don't know much about popular names in China because I have never been there and I'm not familiar with their culture.

× My name Scherma is a common Islami girl name.

✓ My name Scherma is a common Islamic girl name.

The word 'Islami' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'Islamic'. This is an adjective usage issue related to correct word form, which is categorized under singular and plural issues as it affects noun-adjective agreement.

× As far as I know the name casual means coal or liner in Bangley I.

✓ As far as I know, the name 'Casual' means coal or liner in Bangla.

The preposition and phrasing are incorrect. 'In Bangley I' is likely a misspelling of 'in Bangla' (the Bengali language). Also, a comma is needed after 'As far as I know' for clarity.

× I believe that name is very important for a person becauses it carries the whole identity and choosing a good name or meaningful name also have I also had a big impact on them and I can choose Islamic name.

✓ I believe that a name is very important for a person because it carries their whole identity, and choosing a good or meaningful name also has a big impact on them. I would choose an Islamic name.

There are multiple singular/plural and verb agreement issues here: 'name' should be 'a name'; 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'; 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject; 'I also had' is incorrect tense and placement; 'can choose' should be 'would choose' to express future intention. These are singular/plural and tense issues.

× No, there is no one in my family that have same name of mine and my name is very uncommon.

✓ No, there is no one in my family who has the same name as mine, and my name is very uncommon.

The relative pronoun 'that' should be 'who' when referring to people; 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'no one'; 'same name of mine' should be 'the same name as mine'. These are singular/plural and pronoun usage issues.

× I really didn't have this name earlier and I haven't met anyone of my name and it is a really rare now.

✓ I really didn't have this name before, and I haven't met anyone with my name; it is really rare now.

The phrase 'anyone of my name' is incorrect; it should be 'anyone with my name'. Also, 'earlier' is better replaced with 'before' for past reference. These are past tense and preposition usage issues.

× Yes, I believe that it. In the. Developing wild now, people. Preferred names more meaningful. But however, in the past people like to name according to our river or a flower.

✓ Yes, I believe that in the developing world now, people prefer more meaningful names. However, in the past, people liked to name their children after rivers or flowers.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect verb tenses and word order. 'Preferred' should be 'prefer' to match present tense; 'like to name' should be 'liked to name' for past tense; 'our river' should be 'rivers'. These are sentence structure and tense issues.

× I really don't don't know about this becauses I ate I never went China.

✓ I really don't know about this because I have never been to China.

Double 'don't' is incorrect; 'becauses' is misspelled; 'I ate I never went China' is incorrect phrasing and tense. Correct pronoun and verb usage is needed here.

× And I really don't know their culture and how they names are.

✓ And I really don't know their culture or how their names are.

'They names are' is incorrect; it should be 'their names are'. This is a pronoun usage error.