Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and concise. Use proper verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify the meaning of your name more clearly and connect ideas logically using linking words.

例: Yes, my name means 'celebration'. My grandfather gave me this name on my birthday because he was very happy to see me, and I brought a lot of happiness to my family.

提案: Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid unclear phrases like 'religion 2'. Use linking words properly to connect your ideas and explain your reasoning clearly.

例: I would choose names based on the Zodiac sign because it is important in our culture. Moreover, I believe elders should have the opportunity to name the children, as per our family tradition.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and contains unclear phrases like 'as the iron earlier stated'. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: No, everyone in my family has a different name. Each name has a special meaning, often related to the Zodiac sign, and elders are honoured with naming the children.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to give a more confident and structured answer. If you don't know much, say so clearly and briefly, then add any relevant information you do know.

例: I don't know much about how Chinese people name their children now compared to the past. However, I believe they often use Zodiac signs and respect elders when choosing names.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Avoid listing names without explanation and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I don't know much about popular Chinese names, but I have heard that names with special cultural meanings are common, such as 'Sumo' and 'G'. These names reflect important traditions.

× Yes my name have special meaning which is celebration and this name was given by my Gran father to me on my birthday and he was very happy to see me and as I bought a lot of happiness in my family so he named me addition.

✓ Yes, my name has a special meaning which is celebration and this name was given by my grandfather to me on my birthday. He was very happy to see me and as I brought a lot of happiness to my family, he named me Addition.

The subject 'name' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'Gran father' should be 'grandfather'. 'Bought' is incorrect here; the correct past tense of 'bring' is 'brought'. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity. 'Addition' is capitalized as it is a name.

× I would choose names for my next generation by depending on Zodiac sign.

✓ I would choose names for my next generation depending on the Zodiac sign.

The phrase 'by depending on' is incorrect; 'depending on' alone is sufficient. Also, 'Zodiac sign' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific concept.

× Although religion 2 plays an important role but I mostly rely on the tradition of my family which says that elder should be given opportunity to name our generations and.

✓ Although religion plays an important role, I mostly rely on the tradition of my family which says that elders should be given the opportunity to name our generations.

Using both 'Although' and 'but' together is incorrect; only one is needed. 'Religion 2' seems to be a typo and should be 'religion'. 'Elder' should be plural 'elders' and 'the opportunity' needs the definite article. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.

× No, everyone in my family have different names from each other and they their names have special meaning as the iron earlier stated about the Zodiac sign assumptions and the elders are honored for naming the child.

✓ No, everyone in my family has different names from each other and their names have special meanings as I earlier stated about the Zodiac sign assumptions, and the elders are honored for naming the child.

The subject 'everyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. 'They their names' is redundant; 'their names' is correct. 'Iron' is a typo for 'I'. 'Special meaning' should be plural 'special meanings' because it refers to multiple names.

× Honestly I don't know much about Chinese culture and how the preferred to name their child, but uh, I know something about that.

✓ Honestly, I don't know much about Chinese culture and how they preferred to name their child, but uh, I know something about that.

The phrase 'how the preferred' is incorrect; it should be 'how they preferred' to include the subject pronoun. A comma after 'Honestly' improves readability.

× They also mostly prefer the Zodiac sign and their elders to name their child.

✓ They also mostly prefer the Zodiac sign and their elders to name their children.

'Child' should be plural 'children' because it refers generally to multiple children. This matches the plural subject 'they'.

× As I earlier stated that I don't know much about Chinese culture, but I have heard many names that are the most popular in China which are. Sumo. Goodness, G and so on, because they hold a special meaning in the culture and tradition.

✓ As I earlier stated, I don't know much about Chinese culture, but I have heard many names that are the most popular in China, such as Sumo, Goodness, G, and so on, because they hold a special meaning in the culture and tradition.

The sentence had improper punctuation and sentence fragments. 'Which are.' should be connected to the list of names. 'Such as' is better to introduce examples. Commas are added for clarity. 'Goodness' and 'G' are treated as names here.