Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「I did puzzle」ではなく「I did puzzles」や「I used to do puzzles」と言うべきです。また、内容を明確にし、冗長な部分を避けるために、文を整理しましょう。

例: Yes, I used to do puzzles when I was a child. My younger sister often started puzzles but couldn't finish them, so I helped her. Those times are some of my fondest childhood memories.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りがあります。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。例えば、「I usually do puzzles when I feel bored, especially during trips」など、簡潔で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored, especially during trips. They help me pass the time and keep my mind active.

提案: 内容は伝わりますが、文法と語彙の使い方に改善の余地があります。例えば、「I prefer number puzzles to word puzzles」や「Sudoku, which originated in Japan, is my favorite」など、より自然で正確な表現を使いましょう。

例: I prefer number puzzles to word puzzles because I find them more challenging. My favorite number puzzle is Sudoku, which originated in Japan, and I often enjoy solving it.

提案: 回答は理解できますが、文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。例えば、「puzzles」や「keeps their brain sharp」などの表現を使い、例も明確に述べましょう。

例: Yes, I think puzzles are good for older people because they help keep the brain sharp and provide a fun learning activity. For example, my grandmother sometimes tries to do puzzles with me.

× Yes, I did puzzle in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I did puzzles in my childhood.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' because it refers to multiple instances or types of puzzles done in childhood.

× she like, so I always helped her out.

✓ she liked, so I always helped her out.

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the past context of the sentence.

× It was good memory of ours.

✓ It was a good memory of ours.

The noun 'memory' is countable and requires an article 'a' before it.

× I do puzzle drawing my trip I say I honestly do not puzzle that much but I feel extremely feel bored when my trip I do puzzle.

✓ I do puzzles during my trip. I honestly do not do puzzles that much, but I feel extremely bored when I do puzzles on my trip.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' when referring to the activity in general. Also, the sentence structure was corrected for clarity and tense consistency.

× I like doing a number puzzle rather than doing word puzzle.

✓ I like doing number puzzles rather than doing word puzzles.

Both 'number puzzle' and 'word puzzle' should be plural to refer to the general types of puzzles.

× I found a number puzzle more difficult than word puzzle.

✓ I find number puzzles more difficult than word puzzles.

The verb 'found' should be present tense 'find' to match the question about current preference, and the nouns should be plural.

× But I have favorite number puzzle called Sudoku which made in Japan.

✓ But I have a favorite number puzzle called Sudoku which was made in Japan.

The noun 'favorite number puzzle' requires the article 'a'. Also, 'made' should be in past tense 'was made' to indicate origin.

× Yes, I think it is good for old people to do puzzle because the puzzle makes their brain more clear and it can be a good activity to learn.

✓ Yes, I think it is good for old people to do puzzles because puzzles make their brains clearer and it can be a good activity to learn.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' when referring to the activity generally. Also, 'brain' should be plural 'brains' to match 'old people', and 'more clear' should be 'clearer'.

× For example, my grandmother sometimes try to do puzzle with her.

✓ For example, my grandmother sometimes tries to do puzzles with her.

The verb 'try' should be 'tries' to agree with singular subject 'my grandmother'. The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles'.