Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise and directly responsive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details. Correct tense and articles (e.g., “where I was born”). Avoid unnecessary chronology unless relevant.

例: I’m from Manza, the town where I was born. I later moved to another city for my studies and now I live in Dodoma where I got married.

提案: Reply with a clear topic sentence about what you like, use linking words for coherence, and provide specific details. Remove hesitations and awkward phrasing. Mention one or two specific features and explain why they matter.

例: I particularly like that Manza is surrounded by a large lake, which makes it very scenic and good for fishing. Also, it’s known as a ‘rock city’ with interesting landscapes and growing job opportunities for locals.

提案: Use the correct tense and a concise time expression. For duration, use present perfect or simple past appropriately (e.g., “I lived there until I was 17” or “I lived there for 17 years”). Avoid mixing tenses.

例: I lived in Manza until I was 17, so I spent the first 17 years of my life there.

提案: Give a direct answer followed by specific reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words (because, so) and be specific about the types of opportunities (education, work, leisure) to strengthen the response.

例: Yes, I think it is good for young people because it offers growing job and small-business opportunities, and the lakeside environment provides plenty of places to relax and socialise.