Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，地理位置描述混乱且语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地介绍家乡位置，避免重复和语法错误。

例: My hometown is Xinjiang, located in the western part of Taiwan. It is a large city with a diverse population and many restaurants nearby.

提案: 表达有些重复且不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，避免重复，并具体说明喜欢的食物种类。

例: I like the variety of food and drink options in my hometown because it offers many choices for dining and snacks, such as traditional Taiwanese dishes and street food.

提案: 时态使用不准确，句子结构混乱。建议用正确时态表达时间顺序，并简洁说明居住经历。

例: I lived in my hometown for about three years before moving here. After that, I lived in Yunnan at my grandparents' house.

提案: 表达不连贯，语法错误多，逻辑不清晰。建议使用连词组织句子，明确表达观点并具体说明原因。

例: I think my hometown is a good place for young people because the population is growing, new buildings and malls are being constructed, and transportation is improving.

× My hometown is Xinjiang which is located in a West and South side of the multibase city in Taiwan and the place it is a large uh has a large pro population and also there is a lot of food and restaurant and I especially that I live near.

✓ My hometown is Xinjiang, which is located on the west and south sides of the multibase city in Taiwan. The place has a large population, and there are also many food options and restaurants, especially near where I live.

介词使用错误。英文中表示方位时应使用介词'on the west and south sides'而不是'in a West and South side'。此外，句子结构混乱，需拆分成多个句子以表达清楚。建议多注意介词搭配和句子结构。

× My hometown is Xinjiang which is located in a West and South side of the multibase city in Taiwan and the place it is a large uh has a large pro population and also there is a lot of food and restaurant and I especially that I live near.

✓ My hometown is Xinjiang, which is located on the west and south sides of the multibase city in Taiwan. The place has a large population, and there are also many food options and restaurants, especially near where I live.

单复数使用错误。'restaurant'应为复数'restaurants'，因为表示多个餐馆。'a large pro population'中的'pro'应为'population'前的形容词，且population是不可数名词。建议注意名词的单复数形式。

× Well I would say that the plenty of food and drink options provided in the hometown would definitely like my favorite part since that I I have multiple choice when when it comes to like din dining, dinner or choosing some snacks.

✓ Well, I would say that the plenty of food and drink options provided in my hometown are definitely my favorite part since I have multiple choices when it comes to dining, dinner, or choosing some snacks.

量词使用错误。'the plenty of'应为'plenty of'，且'multiple choice'应为'multiple choices'，因为表示多种选择。建议注意量词和名词的搭配及单复数形式。

× I lived there for about 18 years since that I moved here when I was three years old and before I was three years old. I live in Yunnan, which is my grandparents house.

✓ I lived there for about 18 years since I moved here when I was three years old. Before I was three years old, I lived in Yunnan, which is my grandparents' house.

时态使用错误。'I live in Yunnan'应为过去时'lived'，因为描述过去的情况。'grandparents house'应为'grandparents' house'，表示所有格。建议注意时态一致性和所有格的正确使用。

× I lived there for about 18 years since that I moved here when I was three years old and before I was three years old. I live in Yunnan, which is my grandparents house.

✓ I lived there for about 18 years since I moved here when I was three years old. Before I was three years old, I lived in Yunnan, which is my grandparents' house.

介词使用错误。'since that'应为'since'，且句子中应使用逗号分隔时间状语。建议注意介词搭配和标点符号的使用。

× So I would say that is a promise you, you the place have a promising future. Since that the population is increasing, also that the the kind of function of buildings as increasing, that the mall is getting more and more and also the transportation is improved, that more and more transportation is built.

✓ So I would say that it is a promising place and has a promising future. Since the population is increasing, the functions of buildings are also increasing. The malls are getting more and more, and transportation is improving with more and more transport facilities being built.

单复数使用错误。'promise you'应为'promising place'，'the kind of function of buildings as increasing'应为'functions of buildings are increasing'，'the mall is getting more and more'应为'malls are getting more and more'，'more and more transportation is built'应为'more and more transport facilities are built'。建议注意名词的单复数形式和搭配。

× So I would say that is a promise you, you the place have a promising future. Since that the population is increasing, also that the the kind of function of buildings as increasing, that the mall is getting more and more and also the transportation is improved, that more and more transportation is built.

✓ So I would say that it is a promising place and has a promising future. Since the population is increasing, the functions of buildings are also increasing. The malls are getting more and more, and transportation is improving with more and more transport facilities being built.

介词使用错误。'Since that'应为'Since'，'the transportation is improved'应为'transportation is improving'，表达过程。建议注意介词和时态的正确使用。

× So I would say that is a promise you, you the place have a promising future.

✓ So I would say that it is a promising place and has a promising future.

主谓一致错误。'the place have'应为'the place has'，因为主语是单数。建议注意主语和谓语动词的一致性。