Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了家乡的位置和特点，但语法有错误，如“people there is”应为“people there are”，且句子结构稍显重复。建议注意主谓一致，简洁表达，避免冗余。

例: I come from Yuan Chi, a beautiful city in western China. The people there are usually very friendly to visitors from other cities, making it a wonderful place to live.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够自然，如“sweetie fruits”应为“sweet fruits”，且句子连接不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词，使回答更连贯。

例: I really enjoy the sunny natural scenery in my hometown, especially the beautiful mountains and unique rock formations. Moreover, I love the sweet fruits there, which I often share with my family.

提案: 回答基本完整，但句子“Since I was born.”是片段句，建议合并句子使表达更流畅，同时可以增加连接词。

例: I have lived there for 27 years since I was born. I really feel at home because I know the culture well and have many friends there.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但“many delicious food”应为“many delicious foods”或“a lot of delicious food”，且句子结构重复。建议注意名词复数和句式多样化。

例: Yes, I believe my hometown is great for young people because it offers a variety of delicious foods and beautiful scenery. Young people can relax and easily make new friends there.

× The people there is usually friendly to the other people come from the other cities, so it is a wonderful place to live.

✓ The people there are usually friendly to the other people who come from other cities, so it is a wonderful place to live.

这里的主语是复数形式的“people”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。此外，缺少关系代词“who”引导定语从句。

× The people there is usually friendly to the other people come from the other cities, so it is a wonderful place to live.

✓ The people there are usually friendly to the other people who come from other cities, so it is a wonderful place to live.

“the other people come from the other cities”缺少关系代词“who”，导致句子结构不完整。应加上“who”引导定语从句。

× I also like the sweetie fruits, I usually eat them with my family.

✓ I also like the sweet fruits; I usually eat them with my family.

“sweetie”是非正式或口语词汇，正式表达应使用形容词“sweet”修饰“fruits”。此外，两个分句之间应使用分号或句号分开。

× Since I was born.

✓ Since I was born, I have been living there.

“Since I was born.”是一个不完整的句子，缺少主句。应将其与前句合并，形成完整句子。

× there are many delicious food and fruits and the scenery there is really beautiful.

✓ there is much delicious food and many fruits, and the scenery there is really beautiful.

“food”是不可数名词，应使用“much”修饰；“fruits”是可数名词复数，使用“many”。“delicious food and fruits”中应区分可数与不可数名词的量词使用。

× Young people can relax there and they also can make some friends there.

✓ Young people can relax there and they can also make some friends there.

“also”位置应放在情态动词“can”之后，符合英语副词位置规则。