Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Where is your hometown?
受験者
I live in Roheme, Arkansas, which is also known as the city of Saints. It's a very small city. It's very peaceful and a good place to relax your mind.
試験官
What do you like about your home town?
受験者
And the thing I like about my hometown is it's peaceful atmosphere because it's very small city and not populated yet. So everyone can spend a good quality time with others and have uh, uh, and have a relaxed environment. Umm, there is no pressure of work and jobs and, and uh.
試験官
How long have you lived there?
受験者
When I was born, I have been living here for 18 years and I have a lot of memories and many friends there.
試験官
Is your home town a good place for young people?
受験者
And there is a 2 situation. It's a good place for young people if they want to feel relaxed and don't don't have any stress or anxiety in their life, it's a very good place to live. But if they want a very good lifestyle, a good sort of jobs and education, so it's not a good place to live.
評価
総合
Part 1
Where is your hometown?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct answer, then add one or two specific details using linking words to improve coherence.
例: My hometown is Roheme, Arkansas, also called the city of Saints. It is a small and peaceful city, which makes it an ideal place to relax and unwind.
What do you like about your home town?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer contains some hesitation and repetition. To improve, avoid filler words and use linking phrases to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about what makes the atmosphere peaceful.
例: I like the peaceful atmosphere of my hometown because it is small and sparsely populated. Therefore, people can enjoy quality time together without the stress of busy work life.
How long have you lived there?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is understandable but the grammar is incorrect. Use the present perfect tense correctly and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.
例: I have lived in Roheme for 18 years since I was born. During this time, I have made many friends and created lots of happy memories.
Is your home town a good place for young people?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear linking words. Try to organise your ideas more clearly by using connectors like 'however' and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.
例: There are two sides to this. My hometown is great for young people seeking a relaxed and stress-free life. However, if they want better job opportunities and education, it might not be the best place to live.
文法
× it's very small city and not populated yet
✓ it's a very small city and not populated yet
The noun 'city' is singular and requires the singular article 'a' before it. Omitting the article causes a grammatical error. The correct form is 'a very small city'.
× When I was born, I have been living here for 18 years
✓ I have been living here for 18 years
The phrase 'When I was born' incorrectly combines a past event with the present perfect continuous tense. The correct way to express duration up to now is 'I have been living here for 18 years' without 'When I was born'.
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