Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and provides specific information about your hometown. To improve, try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of "all these great sceneries," you could say "beautiful coastal landscapes." Also, consider linking your ideas smoothly.

例: My hometown is Ping Tan, a large island in Fujian, China. It is surrounded by the ocean, offering beautiful coastal landscapes that attract many visitors.

提案: Your answer addresses the question well and includes reasons. However, avoid minor grammatical errors like "seafoods" (use "seafood" as an uncountable noun). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and keep your sentences concise.

例: I like almost everything about my hometown, especially the seafood. It is delicious and nutritious, rich in protein. Even though I now live elsewhere, I still miss the unique flavors of my hometown.

提案: Your answer provides relevant information and personal feelings, which is good. To improve, correct minor grammar mistakes such as "those time" to "those times" and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to avoid vague phrases like "too many precious memories" and be more specific.

例: I've lived there for about 15 years, from elementary school until I left for college. During that time, I made many cherished memories with my family and friends, which I will never forget.

提案: Your answer is well-structured and provides specific reasons. To improve, use more natural expressions such as "young generation" to "young people" or "youth." Also, use linking words like "Moreover" or "In addition" to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I think it is. There are many undeveloped natural sites that allow young people to explore and nurture their curiosity and creativity. Moreover, the food is both delicious and nutritious, which supports their healthy growth.

× I like almost everything, but it is the seafoods there I love the most.

✓ I like almost everything, but it is the seafood there I love the most.

The word 'seafood' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'seafoods' is incorrect. The correct form is 'seafood' when referring to it generally.

× The time contains too many precious memories with my family and friends.

✓ The time contains too many precious memories with my family and friends.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no plural or singular issue detected here.

× I would never forget those time.

✓ I would never forget those times.

The word 'time' here refers to multiple occasions or periods, so the plural form 'times' should be used. 'Those' indicates plural, so 'time' must agree in number.

× Besides, the food there is not only delicious but also nutritious, which are good for the growth of young generation.

✓ Besides, the food there is not only delicious but also nutritious, which is good for the growth of the young generation.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'food', which is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'young generation' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the group.