Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Where is your hometown?
受験者
My hometown is in Vietnam and it's a rural area which locates far apart from the city. It is famous for its beautiful natural scenery including mountains and rivers. One of the most popular tourist attraction is a mountain called Nui Baden, which of a stunning view and very special.
試験官
What do you like about your home town?
受験者
For me, the things that I like about my hometown are the calm and peaceful lifestyle which the busy city cannot provide. Everyone is friendly and welcoming and the scenery is truly pictures which green hills and clear rivers that can help you relax.
試験官
How long have you lived there?
受験者
I have lived in my hometown since I was a child and stayed there until I finished grade 9. Then I moved to the city to continue my studies, and now I'm 16 years old. However, I often return to my hometown during the summer to visit my family and enjoy the peaceful environment.
試験官
Is your home town a good place for young people?
受験者
I think it depends on the personality of the young people. For example, if they enjoy a lively and busy city with many activities, my hometown might not be suitable for them. However, if they prefer a calm, peaceful environment, I would strongly recommend my hometown because if we offer a quiet atmosphere.
評価
総合
Part 1
Where is your hometown?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'locates far apart' nên dùng 'is located far from' và 'which of a stunning view' nên sửa thành 'which has a stunning view'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
例: My hometown is in Vietnam, and it is a rural area located far from the city. It is famous for its beautiful natural scenery, including mountains and rivers. One of the most popular tourist attractions is a mountain called Nui Baden, which has a stunning and unique view.
What do you like about your home town?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ 'scenery is truly pictures' nên là 'scenery is truly picturesque'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể chia thành các câu ngắn hơn để rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.
例: What I like about my hometown is the calm and peaceful lifestyle that you cannot find in a busy city. Everyone is friendly and welcoming. The scenery is truly picturesque, with green hills and clear rivers that help people relax.
How long have you lived there?
スコア: 85.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và thông tin đầy đủ. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm một số liên từ như 'after that' để câu chuyện mạch lạc hơn.
例: I have lived in my hometown since I was a child and stayed there until I finished grade 9. After that, I moved to the city to continue my studies. Now, I'm 16 years old, but I often return to my hometown during the summer to visit my family and enjoy the peaceful environment.
Is your home town a good place for young people?
スコア: 80.0提案: Bạn đã trả lời tốt với ý kiến rõ ràng và ví dụ minh họa. Tuy nhiên, câu cuối có lỗi nhỏ 'because if we offer' nên sửa thành 'because it offers'. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp để câu trả lời chính xác và tự nhiên hơn.
例: I think it depends on the personality of young people. For example, if they enjoy a lively and busy city with many activities, my hometown might not be suitable for them. However, if they prefer a calm and peaceful environment, I would strongly recommend my hometown because it offers a quiet atmosphere.
文法
× One of the most popular tourist attraction is a mountain called Nui Baden, which of a stunning view and very special.
✓ One of the most popular tourist attractions is a mountain called Nui Baden, which has a stunning view and is very special.
The phrase 'tourist attraction' should be plural 'tourist attractions' because it refers to one item among many. Also, 'which of a stunning view' is incorrect; it should be 'which has a stunning view' to properly describe the mountain.
× Everyone is friendly and welcoming and the scenery is truly pictures which green hills and clear rivers that can help you relax.
✓ Everyone is friendly and welcoming, and the scenery is truly picturesque with green hills and clear rivers that can help you relax.
The word 'pictures' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'picturesque' to describe beautiful scenery. Also, 'which green hills' should be 'with green hills' to correctly link the description.
× I think it depends on the personality of the young people. For example, if they enjoy a lively and busy city with many activities, my hometown might not be suitable for them. However, if they prefer a calm, peaceful environment, I would strongly recommend my hometown because if we offer a quiet atmosphere.
✓ I think it depends on the personality of the young people. For example, if they enjoy a lively and busy city with many activities, my hometown might not be suitable for them. However, if they prefer a calm, peaceful environment, I would strongly recommend my hometown because it offers a quiet atmosphere.
The phrase 'because if we offer' is incorrect. It should be 'because it offers' to correctly explain the reason. 'If' is unnecessary and changes the meaning.
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