Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Where is your hometown?
受験者
I was born in Georgia, so I live in and my country and my hometown is really, really beautiful and it's so rich of history and glorious things like nature, historical things and many.
試験官
What do you like about your home town?
受験者
My hometown have many good and bad sides and things, but mostly I like nature.
試験官
How long have you lived there?
受験者
I was born in here, so I lived here like already 70 years, 17 years.
試験官
Is your home town a good place for young people?
受験者
My hometown is so calm and also here is not like clubs and something like this, but here we have so many parks.
評価
総合
Part 1
Where is your hometown?
スコア: 55.0提案: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო სტრუქტურირებული და ბუნებრივი. თავიდან პირდაპირ მიუთითეთ თქვენი მშობლიური ქალაქი, შემდეგ კი დაამატეთ კონკრეტული დეტალები, მაგალითად, ისტორიული ადგილები ან ბუნების სილამაზე. ასევე, თავიდან აიცილეთ ზედმეტი განმეორებები და გაუმჯობესეთ გრამატიკა.
例: My hometown is Tbilisi, the capital of Georgia. It is a beautiful city rich in history and culture, with stunning natural landscapes and many historical landmarks.
What do you like about your home town?
スコア: 50.0提案: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო სრულყოფილი და კონკრეტული. დაიწყეთ თემის წინადადებით, შემდეგ კი გამოიყენეთ ლინკინგ სიტყვები, რათა დაამატოთ დეტალები, მაგალითად, ბუნების კონკრეტული ასპექტები, რაც მოგწონთ.
例: I like many things about my hometown, but mostly I appreciate its beautiful nature. For example, there are many parks and green spaces where people can relax and enjoy fresh air.
How long have you lived there?
スコア: 40.0提案: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ზუსტი და გრამატიკულად სწორი. პირდაპირ მიუთითეთ რამდენი ხანია ცხოვრობთ იქ და გამოიყენეთ სწორი დროის ფორმები.
例: I have lived in my hometown for 17 years since I was born here.
Is your home town a good place for young people?
スコア: 60.0提案: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ორგანიზებული და დეტალური. გამოიყენეთ ლინკინგ სიტყვები, რათა დააკავშიროთ აზრები და დაამატოთ მეტი კონკრეტული ინფორმაცია ახალგაზრდებისთვის ხელმისაწვდომი აქტივობების შესახებ.
例: My hometown is very calm, so it might not have many clubs or nightlife. However, it offers many parks and outdoor spaces, which are great for young people who enjoy nature and outdoor activities.
文法
× I was born in Georgia, so I live in and my country and my hometown is really, really beautiful and it's so rich of history and glorious things like nature, historical things and many.
✓ I was born in Georgia, so I live in my country, and my hometown is really, really beautiful and it's so rich in history and glorious things like nature, historical sites, and many more.
The phrase 'rich of history' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'rich in history'. Also, 'live in and my country' is incorrect; it should be 'live in my country'. Additionally, 'historical things and many' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'historical sites and many more'. These preposition and phrase usage errors affect clarity and grammatical correctness.
× My hometown have many good and bad sides and things, but mostly I like nature.
✓ My hometown has many good and bad sides and things, but mostly I like nature.
The subject 'My hometown' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement error where the verb does not agree in number with the subject.
× I was born in here, so I lived here like already 70 years, 17 years.
✓ I was born here, so I have lived here for about 17 years.
The phrase 'born in here' is incorrect; 'born here' is correct. Also, 'lived here like already 70 years, 17 years' is confusing and incorrect. The correct expression is 'have lived here for about 17 years' to indicate duration. The preposition 'for' is used to express duration of time.
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