Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时句子结构不完整，且存在语法错误。建议使用完整句子表达，避免断句，提升语言流畅度。

例: My hometown is Changin, which is located in southeastern China. It is famous for its tourism industry and delicious food.

提案: 回答中断句不连贯，且表达不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，并用连接词使表达更自然。

例: The reason why I like my hometown is that it has a variety of delicious food. Not only do these dishes look beautiful, but they also taste very good.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和完整句子，并避免重复和断句错误。

例: I have lived there for 21 years since I was a baby. It is a very happy city because the housing and living costs are low.

提案: 回答中断句过多，且最后一句未完成。建议使用连贯的句子，完整表达观点。

例: Of course, this is the best city for young people. On the one hand, the city is famous for its tourism industry, so young people can enjoy a lot of entertainment. On the other hand, the housing and living costs are low, which makes it affordable for them.

× My hometown is changin. Which is located in southeastern China.

✓ My hometown is Changin, which is located in southeastern China.

原句中“Which is located in southeastern China.”是一个不完整的句子，应该与前一句合并成一个复合句，使用逗号连接。

× The reason why I like my hometown is. That there is a variety of delicious food.

✓ The reason why I like my hometown is that there is a variety of delicious food.

原句中“is.”后面不应该断句，导致句子不完整，应将“is”与“that”连接成一个完整的句子。

× Not only do this food. He has beautiful appearance but also taste good.

✓ Not only does this food have a beautiful appearance, but it also tastes good.

原句中“do this food”主谓不一致，且“he”指代错误，食物应使用“it”，动词形式也需调整。

× I lived there for 21 years since I was baby.

✓ I have lived there for 21 years since I was a baby.

“since”引导的时间状语从句应使用现在完成时，且“baby”前应加冠词“a”。

× This place is the most. A most happiness. City as as the housing and living cost here is low.

✓ This place is the happiest city because the housing and living costs here are low.

原句结构混乱，表达不完整，需调整为完整句子并使用正确的形容词最高级形式。

× The city's house and life cost is low, which?

✓ The city's housing and living costs are low, which is beneficial for young people.

原句“which?”不完整，且“house and life cost”表达不准确，应改为“housing and living costs”，动词也需与复数主语一致。