Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免使用不完整的句子，如“Which is famous for its beautiful classical gardens and rich cultural heritage.”，应将其与前一句合并，使表达更自然流畅。

例: My hometown is Suzhou in Jiangsu Province, which is famous for its beautiful classical gardens and rich cultural heritage.

提案: 回答中句子不完整且断断续续，应使用完整句子并适当连接，使表达更连贯自然。

例: I like my hometown because it boasts a rich cultural heritage as well as beautiful classical gardens.

提案: 回答中出现语法错误和不连贯的数字表达，应使用正确的时态和完整句子表达时间长度。

例: I have lived there since I was born, which is about 19 years.

提案: 回答中句子断裂严重，语法错误多，表达不清晰。应使用完整句子，逻辑清楚地说明理由，并使用连接词。

例: Yes, of course. Although my hometown is a historical city, it also combines modern innovation, facilities, and buildings, making it a good place for young people.

× Which is famous for its beautiful classical gardens and rich cultural heritage.

✓ It is famous for its beautiful classical gardens and rich cultural heritage.

该句为不完整句，缺少主语。应补充主语使句子完整。

× My hometown boasts. Rich cultural heritage as well as. Beautiful classical gardens.

✓ My hometown boasts rich cultural heritage as well as beautiful classical gardens.

句子被错误地拆分成多个不完整句，应合并为完整句。

× I lived there since I was born.

✓ I have lived there since I was born.

表示从过去持续到现在的动作，应使用现在完成时而非一般过去时。

× 4. About 19 years.

✓ About 19 years.

句子中“4.”无意义，应删除，保持句子完整。

× although my hometown is historical city.

✓ although my hometown is a historical city.

缺少冠词“a”，单数可数名词前需加冠词。

× Is also.

✓ It is also.

缺少主语，应补充主语使句子完整。

× A very Morgan City.

✓ a very modern city.

单独的短语不完整，应改为完整句子并修正拼写错误。

× Combine weighs more innovation.

✓ It combines more innovation.

句子结构混乱，应调整为完整句子并使用正确动词形式。

× Facilities. And buildings.

✓ facilities and buildings.

断句错误，应合并为完整短语。

× Which? Is a good place for young people.

✓ which is a good place for young people.

断句错误，疑问符号使用不当，应改为连接词引导的从句。