Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct article and verb forms, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words if adding details.

例: I'm currently a student. I'm pursuing a BBA degree and I am also looking for job opportunities in digital marketing to gain practical experience.

提案: Give a direct answer first and then add one specific detail about your freelance work. Use correct prepositions and punctuation to sound natural.

例: I don't have a full-time job at the moment because I'm a student. However, I do freelance as a social media content creator, which helps me build skills and earn some money.

提案: The question asks about a place; clarify which place you mean or reinterpret to answer about freelancing. Begin with a direct opinion and support it with one or two reasons using linking words.

例: If you mean freelancing, yes, it's a good place to work for me because it offers flexibility and varied projects. For example, freelancing lets me manage my study schedule while gaining experience in digital campaigns.

提案: Answer directly whether you like your current work (freelance) and give specific reasons. Use linking phrases (for example, because, so) and keep it to two or three sentences.

例: Yes, I like freelancing at the moment because it gives me flexible hours and a variety of clients. For example, I recently worked on a small campaign that improved a client's engagement by 15%.

提案: Give a clear, structured plan: state your main goal, then add two specific steps or areas you want to develop. Use complete sentences and linking words to show sequence or purpose.

例: In the future, I plan to work in digital marketing and develop into a leadership role. To achieve that, I will gain experience through internships or junior positions and continue learning by taking online courses in analytics and team management.

× Currently I'm student, I'm pursuing BBC A degree but I'm looking for job opportunities.

✓ Currently I'm a student; I'm pursuing a BBA degree, but I'm looking for job opportunities.

Missing articles: 'student' requires 'a student' and 'BBA degree' should use 'a' before it. Also use correct abbreviation 'BBA' and punctuation to improve clarity. Suggestion: insert 'a' before singular countable nouns and use proper punctuation.

× I don't work from anywhere now I am student and I am looking for a job but I do freelance.

✓ I don't work anywhere at the moment; I am a student and I am looking for a job, but I do freelance work.

Countable noun 'student' needs article 'a' and 'freelance' as a noun requires 'freelance work' or 'freelancing'. 'From anywhere' is unnatural; use 'anywhere' or 'at the moment'. Suggestion: add 'a' before 'student' and use 'freelance work'.

× I'm not working right now, I am a student and I'm looking for a job and now I am do freelancing.

✓ I'm not working right now; I am a student and I'm looking for a job, and now I am freelancing.

Incorrect verb form 'do freelancing' — after 'am' use present participle 'freelancing'. Remove redundant 'do'. Suggestion: use continuous form 'am freelancing' or noun 'doing freelance work'.

× I'm not working right now, I am a student and looking for a job but in meantime I do freelance and gain experience and money as well.

✓ I'm not working right now; I am a student and looking for a job, but in the meantime I do freelance work to gain experience and earn money as well.

Use 'in the meantime' (need definite article 'the'). 'Do freelance' should be 'do freelance work' or 'freelance' as verb 'freelance'. 'Gain experience and money' better expressed as 'gain experience and earn money'. Suggestion: include 'the' and use appropriate verb or noun forms.

× I'm not working right now, I'm a student but I'm looking for a job. And where I can grow in leadership role of digital marketing and? Work with the industry.

✓ I'm not working right now; I'm a student but I'm looking for a job where I can grow into a leadership role in digital marketing and work with the industry.

Fragmented sentences and incorrect word order: 'And where I can grow...' should be integrated into the previous clause and use proper infinitive or relative clause 'where I can grow into a leadership role in digital marketing and work with the industry.' Remove stray question mark and combine fragments. Suggestion: combine ideas into one clear sentence and use 'grow into' and 'in' for fields ('in digital marketing').