Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise, correct grammatical errors, and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your job, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "authentic materials") and correct pronouns/time expressions.

例: I'm an English teacher at a local educational institution and I've worked there for over five years. I specialize in improving students' listening skills through weekly classes and occasional workshops, using authentic materials like podcasts and news clips to build real-world comprehension.

提案: Begin with a direct answer about the workplace, then give one or two relevant details. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement) and unclear phrasing ("you set time"). Keep sentences short and coherent and use linking words for clarity.

例: I teach at a nearby language centre that serves both children and young adults. The commute by subway takes about 20 minutes, so I usually use that time to review lesson plans and prepare materials.

提案: Answer directly and use accurate adjectives (avoid words with opposite meaning like "corruptive"). Provide specific examples of what makes the workplace good and one clear drawback. Use linking words to contrast positives and negatives.

例: Yes, it's a good place to work because colleagues are supportive and managers are approachable, so staff suggestions are respected. However, during peak months the workload increases a lot, which can be stressful despite the positive atmosphere.

提案: Answer clearly and avoid repetition (e.g., "well well"). Use precise vocabulary ("well-equipped", "staff lounge"). Keep to two to three sentences and link benefits to how they improve your work.

例: Yes, I enjoy working there because it's well-equipped with projectors and interactive whiteboards that support modern teaching methods. There's also a comfortable staff lounge where teachers can relax, discuss lessons and prepare materials.

提案: Use correct tense and clear expressions of future intent. Start with a direct statement about your plans, then give specific reasons and a concrete example of a potential promotion. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

例: I don't plan to change jobs in the near future because I've been at the institution for over five years and I enjoy the work. There are clear promotion paths, and for example I expect to be considered for a senior teaching role within the next two years.

× I work as an English teacher at an educational institution and they have been there for over 5 years.

✓ I work as an English teacher at an educational institution and I have been there for over five years.

The pronoun 'they' incorrectly refers back to the singular speaker. Use the first-person singular pronoun 'I' to match the subject. Also spell out numbers under ten for formality. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× For example, I use authenticating material.

✓ For example, I use authentic materials.

The word 'authenticating' is a present participle used incorrectly as an adjective here. The correct adjective is 'authentic' and the noun should be plural 'materials' to match general usage. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)

× My subway commutes usually takes about 20 minutes, which is convenient because I usually take you set time to read and review lessons.

✓ My subway commute usually takes about 20 minutes, which is convenient because I usually take time to read and review lessons.

'Commutes' is plural but the subject intended is singular 'commute', so use 'commute' with the third-person singular verb 'takes'. The phrase 'take you set time' is incorrect: 'take time' is the correct expression. Also '20' should be written as '20' is acceptable but keep consistent; main issues are noun number and incorrect phrase. (Grammar problem type ID: 2)

× We have a supportive and corruptive environment where colleagues help one another and managers are approachable and staff opinions are taken seriously.

✓ We have a supportive and collaborative environment where colleagues help one another, managers are approachable, and staff opinions are taken seriously.

'Corruptive' means causing corruption and is not the intended meaning. The correct adjective is 'collaborative' or 'supportive'. Also improve sentence flow with commas and parallel structure. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× Yes, I really enjoy working at my educational institution because it is well well equipped with high tech facilities such as projectors and interactive whiteboards which support modern teaching methods.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy working at my educational institution because it is well equipped with high-tech facilities such as projectors and interactive whiteboards that support modern teaching methods.

The repetition 'well well' is an error; use a single 'well'. 'High tech' should be hyphenated as 'high-tech' when used as a compound adjective. 'Which' is acceptable but 'that' is more natural for essential clauses here. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× There's also a pleasant style lounge where teachers can relax, discuss lessons and prepare material.

✓ There's also a pleasant staff lounge where teachers can relax, discuss lessons, and prepare materials.

'Style lounge' is incorrect word choice; likely 'staff lounge' is intended. Use 'materials' plural for general teaching materials and add a comma in the list for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× I worked at the same educational institution for more than five years, so I don't think I will change jobs in the near future.

✓ I have worked at the same educational institution for more than five years, so I don't think I will change jobs in the near future.

The present perfect 'have worked' is appropriate because the action started in the past and continues to the present. Using simple past 'worked' suggests the action is finished, which conflicts with the rest of the sentence. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× I tend to stay with the same employer because I enjoy the work and they are clear opportunities for promotion.

✓ I tend to stay with the same employer because I enjoy the work and there are clear opportunities for promotion.

The pronoun 'they' incorrectly refers to 'employer' or 'work'; the correct dummy subject for existence is 'there'. Use 'there are' to introduce 'clear opportunities'. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)