Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingiz tabiiy va aniq, lekin ba'zi joylarda takrorlanish va grammatik xatolar mavjud. Masalan, "I'm I am" iborasi takrorlangan va "helps me again" jumlasi noaniq. Javobni qisqartirish va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilish kerak.

例: I am currently studying computer science at university because I enjoy solving problems. At the same time, I work part-time in a local trade company, which gives me practical experience.

提案: Javobda vaqt mosligi va so'z tanlashda xatolar bor. Masalan, "I worked" o'rniga "I work" ishlatish kerak, chunki hozirgi ish haqida gapiryapsiz. "Businesses business" takrorlangan va "specialize" ko'plikka mos kelmaydi. So'zlarni to'g'ri va aniq ishlatishga e'tibor bering.

例: I work for a company called Bozarum, which is based in the Yakasara district. It is a small but rapidly growing business that specializes in selling imported products, mainly electronics and household items.

提案: Javob tabiiy va aniq, lekin bog'lovchi so'zlar ko'proq ishlatilsa, gaplar yanada mantiqiy bo'ladi. Masalan, "because" so'zidan oldin vergul qo'yish va "which" o'rniga "that" ishlatish mumkin.

例: Honestly, yes, it's a very good place to work because I really enjoy the tasks I do every day. Moreover, the environment is friendly and supportive, which makes my job even more enjoyable.

提案: Javob yaxshi tuzilgan va mazmunli. Biroq, "good lights" o'rniga "good lighting" ishlatish yaxshiroq. Shuningdek, bog'lovchi so'zlar yordamida gaplarni yanada silliqroq bog'lash mumkin.

例: Absolutely yes. I definitely like the place where I work because a comfortable and well-equipped workplace can significantly boost my productivity and motivation. For example, having ergonomic chairs and good lighting helps me stay focused and reduces fatigue.

提案: Javobda grammatik va so'z tanlash xatolari bor. "Try myself other jobs" noto'g'ri ifoda, "travel goods" esa noaniq. "'cause" o'rniga "because" ishlatish rasmiyroq. Javobni aniq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilish kerak.

例: In the future, I plan to change my job because I want to try different careers, such as becoming a teacher or working in the travel industry.

× It's a small but rapidly growing businesses business that specialize in selling imported products, mainly electronics and household items.

✓ It's a small but rapidly growing business that specializes in selling imported products, mainly electronics and household items.

The word 'businesses' is plural but should be singular 'business' to match 'a small'. Also, 'specialize' should be 'specializes' to agree with the singular subject 'business'. This is a singular and plural issue and subject-verb agreement issue.

× I worked for a company called Bozarum, which is based in the Yakasara district.

✓ I work for a company called Bozarum, which is based in the Yakasara district.

The question asks about current work, so the present tense 'work' is appropriate instead of past tense 'worked'. Using past tense here is incorrect as it implies the job is no longer held.

× I want to try myself other jobs like a teacher or travel goods.

✓ I want to try other jobs like being a teacher or working in travel goods.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. Instead, the sentence should use 'try other jobs' and specify the jobs properly. Also, 'travel goods' needs clarification as a job field, so 'working in travel goods' is clearer.