Work— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
I'm currently working as a chemical engineer. My job mainly involves designing properties for manufacturing, but at the moment I'm studying English so I can work in this country.
試験官
Where do you work?>
受験者
I'm work in a manufacturing company. My job involves designing processes for manufacturing. The office is very professional and I like the social part of it.
試験官
Is it a good place to work?
受験者
This, I think is a great place to work. The company provides a safe working environment and my team is very supportive. I have learned a lot from them.
試験官
Would you like the place where you work?
受験者
This I really like the place where I work, the people. They are friendly and supportive and the environment is safe and professional. Also I have many chances to learn from experienced people.
試験官
What are your future work plans?
受験者
My future plan is to gain more experience as a chemical engineer and maybe move to a bigger company. I also want to take part in training courses to develop my professional skills.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách tránh lặp từ và làm câu trả lời ngắn gọn hơn. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: I am currently working as a chemical engineer, mainly designing manufacturing processes. At the same time, I am studying English to improve my skills for working in this country.
Where do you work?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I'm work' nên là 'I work'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về công ty hoặc công việc.
例: I work in a manufacturing company where I design production processes. The office environment is very professional, and I enjoy the social interactions with my colleagues.
Is it a good place to work?
スコア: 80.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.
例: I think it is a great place to work because the company ensures a safe environment, and my team is very supportive. For example, they always help me when I face challenges.
Would you like the place where you work?
スコア: 78.0提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng hơn. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn sẽ giúp cải thiện điểm số.
例: Yes, I really like the place where I work because the people are friendly and supportive. Moreover, the environment is safe and professional, and I have many opportunities to learn from experienced colleagues.
What are your future work plans?
スコア: 85.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về kế hoạch tương lai.
例: My future plan is to gain more experience as a chemical engineer and possibly move to a bigger company. Additionally, I want to participate in training courses to further develop my professional skills.
文法
× I'm work in a manufacturing company.
✓ I work in a manufacturing company.
The sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm work' which combines the auxiliary verb 'am' with the base verb 'work'. In present simple tense, for the first person singular, the correct form is just 'I work'. Incorrect: 'I'm work' Correct: 'I work'
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