Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: आपके उत्तर में जानकारी अच्छी है लेकिन इसे थोड़ा और संक्षिप्त और प्राकृतिक बनाना चाहिए। कुछ वाक्यों को जोड़ने के लिए लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें ताकि उत्तर अधिक प्रवाहपूर्ण लगे।

例: I work as a software developer designing web applications, and at the same time, I am preparing for my IELTS exam because I want to study abroad.

提案: आपका उत्तर अच्छा है लेकिन 'suburbs area' की जगह 'suburban area' कहना बेहतर होगा। साथ ही, लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करके वाक्यों को और बेहतर जोड़ें।

例: I work in a mid-sized company located in the suburban area of my city, and I enjoy the dynamic environment because it allows me to collaborate with creative professionals. Moreover, the flexible hours help me maintain a good work-life balance.

提案: आपका उत्तर थोड़ा अधूरा और व्याकरण की गलतियों से भरा है। वाक्य पूरा करें और 'good place' के बजाय 'a good place' कहें। साथ ही, लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।

例: It is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and supportive, which helps me stay motivated and confident. Additionally, the company offers excellent benefits and opportunities for growth. Furthermore, my colleagues often share positive experiences about working here.

提案: यह उत्तर व्याकरण और संरचना में सुधार की आवश्यकता है। 'it's the place I work is' गलत है। वाक्यों को सरल और स्पष्ट बनाएं, और लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।

例: Yes, the place where I work is very comfortable and well-equipped because it has all the facilities I need. Moreover, it significantly boosts my productivity and motivation; for example, natural light and a quiet environment help me focus on my tasks.

提案: आपका उत्तर स्पष्ट है लेकिन इसे और प्रभावी बनाने के लिए लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें और थोड़ा विस्तार करें।

例: I want to pursue further studies abroad to broaden my career goals. Specifically, I plan to focus on data analysis or artificial intelligence, and eventually work with a larger company to gain more experience.

× I work in a mid sized company located in the suburbs area of my city.

✓ I work in a midsized company located in the suburban area of my city.

The phrase 'mid sized' should be combined into one word 'midsized' as it is a compound adjective. Also, 'suburbs area' is incorrect; the correct term is 'suburban area' because 'suburban' is the adjective form describing the area.

× It is good place because the environment is friendly and people are also supportive, which helps me to stay motivated and boost my confidence.

✓ It is a good place because the environment is friendly and people are also supportive, which helps me to stay motivated and boost my confidence.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'good place'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article; here, 'a' is appropriate.

× Moreover, my colleagues often share positive experiences about.

✓ Moreover, my colleagues often share positive experiences about the company.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'about'. Adding 'the company' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, it's the place I work is very comfortable and well equipped because it has all the facilities which I need.

✓ Yes, the place where I work is very comfortable and well equipped because it has all the facilities that I need.

The original sentence has a redundant and incorrect structure 'it's the place I work is'. Rephrasing to 'the place where I work' corrects the sentence structure and clarity.

× Moreover, it significantly boost my productivity and motivation, for example, having natural light and a quiet environment on my task.

✓ Moreover, it significantly boosts my productivity and motivation; for example, having natural light and a quiet environment for my tasks.

The verb 'boost' should be in third person singular form 'boosts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'on my task' is incorrect; 'for my tasks' is the proper prepositional phrase.