Work— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
I am employed as a software developer in tech firm. My work involves creating and designing web applications simultaneously. I am preparing for my exam to pursue further studies abroad.
試験官
Where do you work?>
受験者
I work in a technical form which is situated in the suburb areas and I my work involves many coding tasks and a problem solving task.
試験官
Is it a good place to work?
受験者
Yes, I really enjoyed to work there because it's a provider, wishful and welcoming environment. Also my colleagues and manager is very kind and calm, they always support me and we all are together a great team.
試験官
Would you like the place where you work?
受験者
The place I work was very pleasant and gets a good natural light and the environment was environment is also very calming and I also enjoy working there with colleagues and I also enjoy the teamwork.
試験官
What are your future work plans?
受験者
I haven't decided yet but I will definitely pursue my further studies abroad regarding to this field which helps me to improve my personal goals and also help me to future aspect.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 75.0提案: आपके उत्तर में विषय वाक्य स्पष्ट है, लेकिन वाक्य संरचना और शब्दावली में सुधार की आवश्यकता है। उत्तर को अधिक प्राकृतिक और प्रभावी बनाने के लिए वाक्यों को सरल और स्पष्ट रखें, और अनावश्यक शब्दों से बचें।
例: I work as a software developer at a tech firm where I design and create web applications. Currently, I am also preparing for exams to pursue further studies abroad.
Where do you work?
スコア: 60.0提案: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और शब्द चयन में त्रुटियाँ हैं। उत्तर को अधिक स्पष्ट और सुसंगत बनाने के लिए सही शब्दों का उपयोग करें और वाक्य को संक्षिप्त रखें।
例: I work at a tech company located in the suburbs. My job mainly involves coding and solving technical problems.
Is it a good place to work?
スコア: 65.0提案: उत्तर में कुछ शब्द गलत उपयोग हुए हैं और वाक्य संरचना में सुधार की जरूरत है। अपने विचारों को स्पष्ट और प्राकृतिक तरीके से व्यक्त करें, और उपयुक्त शब्दों का चयन करें।
例: Yes, I really enjoy working there because it has a positive and welcoming environment. My colleagues and manager are kind and supportive, and we work well as a team.
Would you like the place where you work?
スコア: 60.0提案: आपके उत्तर में वाक्य दोहराव और व्याकरण की गलतियाँ हैं। उत्तर को संक्षिप्त, स्पष्ट और प्रवाहपूर्ण बनाने के लिए अनावश्यक पुनरावृत्ति से बचें।
例: I like my workplace because it is pleasant, well-lit with natural light, and has a calming atmosphere. I also enjoy collaborating with my colleagues.
What are your future work plans?
スコア: 65.0提案: उत्तर में व्याकरण और शब्द चयन में सुधार की आवश्यकता है। अपने भविष्य के योजनाओं को स्पष्ट और प्रभावी ढंग से व्यक्त करने के लिए सरल और सही वाक्य बनाएं।
例: I haven't made a final decision yet, but I plan to pursue further studies abroad in this field to achieve my personal goals and enhance my career prospects.
文法
× I am employed as a software developer in tech firm.
✓ I am employed as a software developer in a tech firm.
यहाँ 'tech firm' से पहले 'a' article की आवश्यकता है क्योंकि यह एक countable singular noun है और पहली बार उल्लेख किया गया है।
× I work in a technical form which is situated in the suburb areas and I my work involves many coding tasks and a problem solving task.
✓ I work in a technical firm which is situated in the suburban areas and my work involves many coding tasks and problem-solving tasks.
'technical form' गलत है, सही शब्द 'technical firm' है। 'suburb areas' के बजाय 'suburban areas' उपयोग करें क्योंकि 'suburban' adjective है। 'I my work' में 'I' अनावश्यक है। 'problem solving task' को 'problem-solving tasks' में सुधारें क्योंकि यह compound adjective है और plural होना चाहिए।
× Yes, I really enjoyed to work there because it's a provider, wishful and welcoming environment.
✓ Yes, I really enjoy working there because it's a positive, peaceful and welcoming environment.
'enjoyed to work' गलत है, सही रूप 'enjoy working' है क्योंकि 'enjoy' के बाद verb + -ing form आता है। 'provider' और 'wishful' यहाँ गलत शब्द हैं, संभवतः 'positive' और 'peaceful' सही होंगे।
× Also my colleagues and manager is very kind and calm, they always support me and we all are together a great team.
✓ Also, my colleagues and manager are very kind and calm; they always support me and we are all together a great team.
'colleagues and manager' बहुवचन है इसलिए verb 'is' की जगह 'are' होना चाहिए। 'we all are together a great team' में 'we are all together a great team' अधिक सही है।
× The place I work was very pleasant and gets a good natural light and the environment was environment is also very calming and I also enjoy working there with colleagues and I also enjoy the teamwork.
✓ The place I work in is very pleasant and gets good natural light; the environment is also very calming. I also enjoy working there with my colleagues and enjoy the teamwork.
यहाँ वाक्य में tense inconsistency है। 'was' को 'is' से बदलना चाहिए क्योंकि अभी भी काम कर रहे हैं। 'environment was environment is' दोहराव है। 'a good natural light' में 'a' अनावश्यक है क्योंकि 'light' uncountable noun है।
× I haven't decided yet but I will definitely pursue my further studies abroad regarding to this field which helps me to improve my personal goals and also help me to future aspect.
✓ I haven't decided yet, but I will definitely pursue my further studies abroad in this field, which will help me improve my personal goals and also help me in my future career.
'regarding to' गलत है, सही है 'in this field'। 'helps' को 'will help' में बदलना चाहिए क्योंकि भविष्य की योजना है। 'help me to future aspect' गलत है, सही वाक्य 'help me in my future career' या 'future prospects' होगा।
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