Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本信息，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“better communication Design”应为“better communication design”或更准确的专业名称。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，提升表达的自然流畅度。

例: I'm currently a student at Jiangxi University of Technology, majoring in Communication Design because I have a passion for painting and art, which makes the subject very interesting to me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“so I not work”应为“I don't work”。建议使用完整句子，表达清晰且自然。

例: I'm currently a student, so I don't have a job yet and haven't started working.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“it's very It's near the librarians”。建议注意句子连贯性，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，避免重复。

例: Yes, it's a great place because it's close to libraries, parks, and cafes, which provide students with many options to relax.

提案: 回答不完整且有重复，如“because it it has”。建议完整表达观点，避免重复，并补充具体细节使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, definitely. The place where I study is very comfortable and suitable because it has three libraries and many quiet study areas.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，如“looking forward to become”应为“looking forward to becoming”，且表达不完整。建议使用正确的语法结构，完整表达理由。

例: I'm looking forward to becoming an English teacher because I love teaching and working with students, and I believe I am very patient.

× My major is better communication Design and I choose it because I'm passionate about painting and art and I think it's interesting to study.

✓ My major is better Communication Design and I chose it because I'm passionate about painting and art and I think it's interesting to study.

这里“better”用法不正确，应该是专业名称“Communication Design”，且“choose”应使用过去式“chose”，因为选择专业是过去的动作。建议将“better”去掉，动词改为过去式。

× I'm a student now so I not work.

✓ I'm a student now so I do not work.

句中缺少助动词“do”来构成否定句，正确结构是“I do not work”。

× So I don't I haven't start work.

✓ So I haven't started work yet.

“start”应使用过去分词“started”与“have”构成现在完成时，且“don't I haven't”结构混乱，应简化为“I haven't started work yet”。

× It's near the librarians, parks and cafes.

✓ It's near the library, parks and cafes.

“librarians”是“图书管理员”，此处应使用“library”（图书馆）作为地点名词。

× It's provide students a variety of choices to relax.

✓ It provides students with a variety of choices to relax.

主语“It”后动词应加第三人称单数形式“provides”，且“provide”后应加介词“with”表示提供。

× Yes, definitely. The place where I study is very comfortable and suitable because it it has three libraries and.

✓ Yes, definitely. The place where I study is very comfortable and suitable because it has three libraries.

句中重复了“it”，应删除多余的“it”，使句子通顺。

× I'm looking forward to become an English teacher and because I'm deeply loved teaching and students and I think I have more patience.

✓ I'm looking forward to becoming an English teacher because I deeply love teaching and students and I think I have a lot of patience.

“look forward to”后应接动名词“becoming”，而非不定式“become”；“loved”应为“love”，且“more patience”应改为“a lot of patience”更自然。