Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many fillers like 'umm' and 'uh'. Try to give a clear and concise response without hesitation. For example, directly state your current status and briefly mention past work experience if relevant.

例: I am currently a student, but I worked part-time last year to gain some experience.

提案: Avoid refusing to answer questions. Instead, try to respond politely and provide some information, even if brief. This shows willingness to engage and improves your score.

例: I used to work at a local bookstore last year, which was a great experience.

提案: Your answer is short and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Also, avoid grammatical errors and redundancy.

例: No, it was not a good place to work because I had some difficulties with a colleague who was unfriendly, which made the environment uncomfortable.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and does not directly address the question. Try to respond clearly and expand your answer with supporting details or explanations.

例: I am not currently working, but if I were to work again, I would prefer a place with a friendly and supportive atmosphere.

提案: Your answer is clear but very brief. Try to expand by explaining why you want to be a psychotherapist or what motivates you, using linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: I want to be a psychotherapist because I am interested in helping people improve their mental health and well-being.

× I am a student but I uh, had to work like umm last year.

✓ I am a student but I had to work last year.

The phrase 'had to work like umm last year' contains unnecessary filler words 'like umm' which do not contribute to the meaning and make the sentence informal and unclear. Removing them improves clarity and correctness.

× Please next question.

✓ Please ask the next question.

The original sentence lacks a verb and is incomplete. Adding 'ask' completes the sentence and makes it a polite request.

× No, this is not a good place because I have a colleague that they don't like me.

✓ No, this is not a good place because I have a colleague who doesn't like me.

Using both 'that' and 'they' to refer to the same colleague is redundant and incorrect. 'Who' is the correct relative pronoun for people, and the verb should agree with the singular subject 'colleague'.

× And now I'm not working. I'm student.

✓ And now I'm not working. I'm a student.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'student'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article.

× I want to be psychotherapist.

✓ I want to be a psychotherapist.

The noun 'psychotherapist' is a singular countable noun and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.