Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时时态使用不准确，"I work"应为"I have been working"或"I am working"，句子结构稍显复杂且缺少连贯性。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致性。

例: I graduated last year, and since then I have been working at a drinks company. Currently, I am preparing to continue my postgraduate studies.

提案: 回答中出现了发音错误（"walk"应为"work"），句子不完整且表达混乱，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议练习发音，使用完整句子，并提供更具体的信息。

例: I work for a beverage company that offers around 300 different products, including both domestic and international brands.

提案: 回答表达了观点和理由，但句子中有重复和语法错误，且缺少连接词使句子更流畅。建议避免重复，使用连接词如"because"或"so"来增强逻辑性。

例: Although my colleagues are friendly and I have learned a lot, I wouldn't stay there because I want to become an English or psychology teacher in a primary school.

提案: 回答较为完整，表达了个人感受和理由，但句子结构可以更自然，连接词使用得当。建议稍作调整，使表达更简洁自然。

例: Not really. Although the workplace is tidy and well-equipped, and my colleagues are friendly, I prefer to focus on a career that I am truly passionate about.

提案: 回答清晰且内容具体，但句子中"psychological teacher"应为"psychology teacher"，连接词使用较好。建议注意词汇准确性。

例: I plan to become either an English or a psychology teacher. Although I haven't decided which subject yet, I will continue my studies to prepare for my future career.

× I graduated last year and since then I work in a drinks company and now I'm preparing for further study to continue my postgraduate education.

✓ I graduated last year and since then I have been working in a drinks company and now I'm preparing for further study to continue my postgraduate education.

这里使用现在完成进行时（have been working）更合适，因为动作从过去开始一直持续到现在。简单现在时（work）不符合时间状况。

× I walk for a drink brand company here where we have larger amount of SKU maybe 300 and both domestic brand and international brand as well.

✓ I work for a drink brand company here where we have a large number of SKUs, maybe 300, including both domestic and international brands.

动词应为work而非walk；'larger amount of SKU'应改为'a large number of SKUs'，因为SKU是可数名词；'brand'应复数；句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× And we we, we, we hold the.

✓ And we hold the products.

原句重复且不完整，需删去多余词汇并补充完整句子，使表达完整且通顺。

× Although people there are friendly and I learned a lot from working there, I would I wouldn't stay there anymore because I want to be English or psychological teacher in the primary school in the future.

✓ Although people there are friendly and I have learned a lot from working there, I wouldn't stay there anymore because I want to be an English or psychology teacher in a primary school in the future.

'would I wouldn't'重复，应去掉多余的'would'；'psychological teacher'应改为'psychology teacher'；'in the primary school'应改为'in a primary school'。

× Not really, although we have a tidy and well equipped atmosphere and colleagues are friendly, I still want to focus more on what I feel really enthusiastic about rather than the settings.

✓ Not really, although we have a tidy and well-equipped environment and colleagues are friendly, I still want to focus more on what I feel really enthusiastic about rather than the setting.

'atmosphere'通常不可数且不搭配'tidy'，改为'environment'更合适；'well equipped'应加连字符；'settings'改为单数'setting'更符合语境。

× I plan to be an English or psychological teacher and I'm still hesitant about which subject I will choose, and I will continue further study to support my future job.

✓ I plan to be an English or psychology teacher and I'm still hesitant about which subject I will choose, and I will continue further study to support my future job.

'psychological teacher'应改为'psychology teacher'，因为前者用法不当。