Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“a quite challenging work”应为“quite challenging work”。此外，回答可以更简洁自然，避免重复表达。

例: I work as an assistant to the sports director at an international school, where I coordinate sports extracurricular activities. It's challenging but rewarding, and I learn a lot from it.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，如“because”后面可以加上更多细节说明。

例: I work at an international school in Jianning Township, about a 30-minute commute from my home. I enjoy it because my work is valued, and I have the opportunity to make many decisions, which makes my job fulfilling.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构有些生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并解释“more organic”的具体含义。

例: Overall, it's a good place to work with a multicultural environment similar to my previous job. My colleagues are helpful, and the leaders are supportive. However, I hope the work processes could be more flexible and natural.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且缺少连接词。建议分句并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I like my workplace. It's a large school with excellent facilities. We are provided with three free meals daily, and there are frequent sports tournaments that bring together students and teachers from other schools.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议完整表达未来计划，并使用连贯的句子。

例: I plan to become a school teacher in the future. To prepare, I intend to observe more classes and gain practical teaching experience.

× I currently work at an International School as an assistant to sports director and also I'm in charge of coordination of sports ECA.

✓ I currently work at an International School as an assistant to the sports director and also I'm in charge of the coordination of sports ECA.

这里缺少定冠词“the”，因为“sports director”和“coordination”是特指的，应该使用定冠词。

× It's a quite challenging work but also I can learn a lot from it.

✓ It's quite challenging work but also I can learn a lot from it.

“quite”前不需要冠词“a”，因为“work”是不可数名词，不能用不定冠词。

× I work at an International School located in Jianning Township, which is about 30 minutes commute from my house.

✓ I work at an International School located in Jianning Township, which is about a 30-minute commute from my house.

“30 minutes commute”缺少冠词和连字符，正确表达是“a 30-minute commute”，表示“30分钟的通勤”。

× It has the similar multicultural work environment as the place I worked before and colleagues are very helpful.

✓ It has a similar multicultural work environment as the place I worked before and colleagues are very helpful.

“similar”前应使用不定冠词“a”，因为“environment”是可数名词单数形式。

× Leaders are supportive, just I hope things can be more organic.

✓ Leaders are supportive, but I hope things can be more organic.

“just”用作连词不合适，应该用“but”表示转折。

× Yes, I like the place where I work. It's a big school with the best facilities, 3 free meals are provided every day and we constantly have sports tournaments here which bring students and the teachers from other schools so we can all get together.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work. It's a big school with the best facilities, 3 free meals are provided every day and we constantly have sports tournaments here which bring students and teachers from other schools so we can all get together.

“the teachers”前的定冠词“the”不必要，泛指其他学校的老师时不需要定冠词。

× I want to become a teacher at school, so my future work plans are including observing. More classes.

✓ I want to become a teacher at school, so my future work plans include observing more classes.

“are including observing. More classes.”句子结构不完整且断裂，应合并为“include observing more classes”，使句子完整通顺。