Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为完整，但句子结构稍显简单，且信息表达可以更自然流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复信息。

例: I am currently studying at Lingnan Normal University, and I am expected to graduate next year.

提案: 回答不够清晰，'Lena'的具体含义不明确，缺乏详细信息。建议明确说明工作地点和职位，并补充相关细节。

例: I work at the university library, where I assist students with finding resources and managing book loans.

提案: 回答内容偏离问题焦点，问题是关于工作地点，而回答却描述了城市。建议直接评价工作环境，并用连词连接观点。

例: Yes, it is a great place to work because the environment is friendly and the facilities are modern, which makes my job enjoyable.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，且内容较为泛泛。建议避免重复，提供更具体的理由支持观点。

例: Yes, I like working here because the weather is pleasant, the lifestyle is relaxed, and I have many good friends around.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多，且句子未完成。建议理清思路，使用完整句子表达未来计划，并避免重复。

例: I plan to apply for a master's degree within the next five years, but if I find a suitable job before that, I might start working first.

× It is a beautiful coastal city with vibrant and modern lifestyle and people live there will have many job opportunities.

✓ It is a beautiful coastal city with a vibrant and modern lifestyle, and people who live there will have many job opportunities.

此句中'lifestyle'是可数名词，前面缺少冠词'a'，且缺少连接词'who'引导定语从句，导致句子结构不完整。应加冠词并补充连接词，使句子通顺。

× Yes, absolutely. The weather here is pleasant and the lifestyle lifestyle here is comfortable and I have a lots of friends here.

✓ Yes, absolutely. The weather here is pleasant and the lifestyle here is comfortable, and I have lots of friends here.

'a lots of'是不正确的表达，正确用法是'lots of'表示大量，且'lifestyle'重复出现，应删除重复词。

× Maybe I will apply for a masters degree in next 5 years but I'm not decided yet because if there have any any proper job for me I will try to walk first then go to my.

✓ Maybe I will apply for a master's degree in the next 5 years, but I'm not decided yet because if there is any proper job for me, I will try to work first then go to my master's.

此句中'masters degree'应为'master's degree'表示硕士学位，'in next 5 years'前应加定冠词'the'，'if there have'应为'if there is'，'walk'应为'work'，且句子末尾不完整，需补充完整。