Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: សូមប្រើប្រាស់វាក្យសព្ទដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ និងបញ្ចាក់ច្បាស់ពីស្ថានភាពការងាររបស់អ្នក។ ការឆ្លើយតបគួរតែមានរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធល្អ និងមិនប្រើពាក្យមិនត្រឹមត្រូវ។

例: I am currently working as a sales assistant at a local store.

提案: សូមឆ្លើយតបដោយផ្តល់ព័ត៌មានច្បាស់លាស់អំពីទីតាំង ឬប្រភេទការងាររបស់អ្នក។ ការឆ្លើយតបនេះមិនច្បាស់និងមិនមានអត្ថន័យ។

例: I work at a supermarket near my house.

提案: សូមប្រើប្រាស់វាក្យសព្ទត្រឹមត្រូវ និងបញ្ជាក់ពីមូលហេតុដែលអ្នកគិតថាកន្លែងធ្វើការនេះល្អ។ ការឆ្លើយតបគួរតែមានរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធច្បាស់ និងមិនមានការស្ទាក់ស្ទើរ។

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and I can save money for my daily expenses.

提案: សូមប្រើប្រាស់វាក្យសព្ទត្រឹមត្រូវ និងបញ្ជាក់ពីមូលហេតុដែលអ្នកចូលចិត្តកន្លែងធ្វើការរបស់អ្នក។ ការឆ្លើយតបគួរតែមានរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធល្អ និងមានការប្រើពាក្យត្រឹមត្រូវ។

例: I really like my workplace because my colleagues are friendly and my boss is supportive. I hope to work here for a long time.

提案: សូមឆ្លើយតបដោយរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធល្អ និងបញ្ជាក់ពីផែនការអនាគតរបស់អ្នកយ៉ាងច្បាស់។ ការប្រើពាក្យគួរតែត្រឹមត្រូវ និងមានភាពច្បាស់លាស់។

例: In the future, I would like to become a research manager and work in an office environment.

× Yeah, I am a worker in recent days.

✓ Yeah, I have been working recently.

The phrase 'in recent days' indicates a recent period, so the present perfect continuous tense 'have been working' is appropriate to express ongoing action in the recent past to present.

× I'm broke it a whole time in recent days.

✓ I've been broke the whole time recently.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Broke' is an adjective meaning having no money, so 'I've been broke' is correct. 'The whole time' fits better than 'a whole time', and 'recently' is more natural than 'in recent days' here.

× I can't get high salary and saving money to split on something on like a spend on a daily, daily day, every day.

✓ I can't get a high salary and save money to spend on things daily.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and verb forms. 'Get a high salary' requires the article 'a'. 'Saving' should be 'save' to match 'can't get'. 'Split on something on like a spend on a daily, daily day, every day' is confusing; 'spend on things daily' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I'm very like my place, my birth and I want to work here for a long time because they're here, here, here have many friendly and my boss is.

✓ I really like my workplace and I want to work here for a long time because the people here are very friendly and my boss is too.

'I'm very like' is incorrect; 'I really like' is correct. 'My birth' is incorrect; likely meant 'my workplace'. 'They're here, here, here have many friendly' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'the people here are very friendly'. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring.

× I want to work at a office.

✓ I want to work at an office.

The article 'a' is incorrect before a vowel sound; it should be 'an' before 'office'.