Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和不准确的表达。可以简洁明了地介绍自己是学生，所学专业和未来职业规划。

例: I'm a student at Guangdong University of Technology, majoring in law. I plan to become a lawyer in the future.

提案: 回答重复且语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，使用正确的时态和单复数形式。

例: I am currently a student studying law at university, so I don't have a job yet.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: I think working at a university is different from other jobs because most universities are government-owned. Therefore, staff and professors usually have stable salaries and job security.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议明确表达自己的观点，避免模糊和重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I'm not sure if my professors like working here, but I believe working at a university is a good job because besides teaching, you can also do part-time work in society, such as being a lawyer or counselor.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的词汇和句型，清晰表达未来计划，并适当使用连接词。

例: There are several options for law graduates. One is to become a company consultant, another is to become a lawyer, and some choose to pursue a master's degree. I prefer to become a lawyer.

× I'm a student and now I'm study in industrial of Guangdong universities and my major subject is law.

✓ I'm a student and now I'm studying at Guangdong University of Technology, and my major subject is law.

动词时态错误，'study' 应该用现在进行时 'studying' 来表示正在进行的动作。建议使用现在进行时表达正在学习的状态。

× I'm a student and now I'm study in industrial of Guangdong universities and my major subject is law.

✓ I'm a student and now I'm studying at Guangdong University of Technology, and my major subject is law.

介词使用错误，'in industrial of Guangdong universities' 不正确，应该用 'at Guangdong University of Technology' 来表示在某个大学学习。

× I want to be a lawyer if I go walking.

✓ I want to be a lawyer if I have the chance.

情态动词使用不当，'if I go walking' 不符合语境，应该用 'if I have the chance' 表达条件。

× Uh, I'm currently say I'm I'm a student and I'm studying in the university and my majors are is law so I don't have a works in society.

✓ Uh, I'm currently a student and I'm studying at the university, and my major is law, so I don't have a job in society.

代词和名词使用错误，'majors are is law' 应为 'major is law'，'works' 应为 'job'，表达更准确。

× The most most of universities is are belong to government.

✓ Most universities belong to the government.

单复数错误，'most of universities is are' 应为 'most universities belong to'，动词和名词需保持一致。

× The staff and the professor in there have stable salaries and stable works.

✓ The staff and the professors there have stable salaries and stable jobs.

介词和名词使用错误，'in there' 应为 'there'，'professor' 应为复数 'professors'，'works' 应为 'jobs'。

× Well, I think I don't know whether my professor like this place but I think working in university is a good job because except the job you are doing in universities, you can also have some part time job in the society like be a lawyer or counselor.

✓ Well, I think I don't know whether my professor likes this place, but I think working at a university is a good job because besides the job you are doing at the university, you can also have some part-time jobs in society like being a lawyer or counselor.

代词和动词形式错误，'professor like' 应为 'professor likes'，'except' 应为 'besides'，'job' 应为复数 'jobs'，'like be a lawyer' 应为 'like being a lawyer'。

× Well there are seldoms choices for students graduated from law.

✓ Well, there are seldom choices for students graduating from law.

单复数和词形错误，'seldoms choices' 应为 'seldom choices'，'students graduated' 应为 'students graduating'。

× One is to become a company consultant and the second one is to become a lawyer.

✓ One is to become a company consultant, and the second is to become a lawyer.

介词使用不当，句子中逗号和连接词使用需调整，使句子更通顺。

× Or maybe you can keep on to be a higher degree masters and I prefer to become a lawyer.

✓ Or maybe you can continue to pursue a master's degree, and I prefer to become a lawyer.

动词形式错误，'keep on to be' 应为 'continue to pursue'，'higher degree masters' 应为 'master's degree'。