Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but not very natural. Instead of 'reading in GS Niketan', you can say 'studying at GS Niketan'. Also, avoid using 'recently' in this context unless you specify when you started. Try to make your answer more direct and clear.

例: I am a student studying at GS Niketan.

提案: The answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'At the road GS Niketan' is confusing. If you mean you work at GS Niketan, say so clearly. Also, use present simple tense for regular work. Avoid 'recently' unless you specify time.

例: I work at GS Niketan school.

提案: Your answer has grammar and vocabulary errors. Instead of 'there is so peace', say 'it is very peaceful'. Also, 'app friendly friendly' is unclear; perhaps you meant 'approachable and friendly'. Use linking words like 'because' properly and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because it is very peaceful and the owner of the school is very friendly and approachable.

提案: The answer repeats the word 'peace' and 'peaceful' incorrectly. Use 'peaceful' only. Also, try to add more details to make your answer richer and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is very peaceful and the environment is comfortable.

提案: Your answer is clear and direct but very short. Try to add reasons or details to make your answer more complete and interesting.

例: I want to be a doctor because I enjoy helping people and I am interested in medical science.

× I am a student and I am recently reading in GS Niketan.

✓ I am a student and I am currently studying at GS Niketan.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used to mean 'studying'. In English, 'reading' is not commonly used to express studying at an institution. Also, 'recently' is better replaced with 'currently' to indicate ongoing action. The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to an institution.

× Recently I am working at the road GS Niketan.

✓ Recently, I have been working at GS Niketan on the road.

The present continuous 'I am working' is less appropriate with 'recently' which suggests a period up to now; present perfect continuous 'have been working' fits better. Also, 'at the road GS Niketan' is awkward; 'at GS Niketan on the road' is clearer.

× Yes, it is good place to work because there is so peace and the owner of the school is also very app friendly friendly.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work because there is so much peace and the owner of the school is also very friendly.

The phrase 'good place' needs the article 'a'. 'So peace' is incorrect; it should be 'so much peace' to quantify an uncountable noun. The phrase 'app friendly friendly' is likely a typo; 'very friendly' is correct.

× Yes, I like the place where I work because it is very peace, peaceful.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work because it is very peaceful.

'Peace' is a noun and cannot be used as an adjective here. 'Peaceful' is the correct adjective to describe the place. The comma is unnecessary.