Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为直接，但语法和表达不够自然，缺少冠词和动词形式错误。建议注意冠词使用和动词时态，使表达更地道。

例: I am currently an undergraduate student at the University of Macau, majoring in Business Intelligence and Data Analysis.

提案: 回答没有直接回应“工作地点”问题，且句子结构不够自然。建议直接说明工作地点或学习地点，并使用更自然的表达。

例: I don't work at the moment; I am studying at the University of Macau, which is well-known in the Macau and Guangdong region.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，且未直接回答“工作环境”问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意主谓一致和冠词使用。

例: Although I don't work currently, the University of Macau is a great place to study because many excellent professors support students.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，有语法和词汇错误，且句子不连贯。建议使用清晰的句子结构，避免重复，准确表达观点。

例: Definitely, I like the university where I study because the students are warm-hearted and friendly, and the professors are very professional.

提案: 回答表达不够自然，语法有误，且用词不准确。建议使用正确的短语和时态，表达更流畅。

例: I am currently applying for a master's degree at the National University of Singapore because I want to continue my studies in depth.

× I'm now an undergraduate student in University of Macau, major in Business Intelligence and Data Analysis.

✓ I'm now an undergraduate student at the University of Macau, majoring in Business Intelligence and Data Analysis.

动词 'major' 在这里应使用动名词形式 'majoring'，表示专业方向。

× I'm now an undergraduate student in University of Macau, major in Business Intelligence and Data Analysis.

✓ I'm now an undergraduate student at the University of Macau, majoring in Business Intelligence and Data Analysis.

表示在某个学校时，应该用介词 'at' 而不是 'in'。

× I'm studying in University of Macau, a famous school in the region of Macau and Guangdong Province.

✓ I'm studying at the University of Macau, a famous school in the region of Macau and Guangdong Province.

表示在某个学校时，应该用介词 'at' 而不是 'in'。

× there are a lot of great professor that helps you with your study.

✓ there are a lot of great professors that help you with your study.

'professor' 应该用复数形式 'professors'，因为前面有 'a lot of'，表示很多。动词 'helps' 也应改为复数形式 'help'，与复数主语一致。

× there are a lot of great professor that helps you with your study.

✓ there are a lot of great professors that help you with your study.

主语是复数 'professors'，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'help'，保持主谓一致。

× And I don't work at this moment.

✓ I don't work at this moment.

句首不宜使用连词 'And'，应直接开始句子。

× the students here are really warm hearted and friendly.

✓ the students here are really warm-hearted and friendly.

'warm hearted' 应写作复合形容词 'warm-hearted'，表示热心的。

× We are, we are real and the professional here are really, really professor profession.

✓ We are real, and the professionals here are really, really professional.

'professional' 应用复数形式 'professionals'，且 'professor profession' 词不达意，应改为形容词 'professional'。

× I'm just applying a masters degree in University of Singapore and I want to continue my deeper study here.

✓ I'm just applying for a master's degree at the National University of Singapore, and I want to continue my deeper study here.

申请学位应使用介词 'apply for'，学校名称前应加定冠词 'the'，且正确校名为 'National University of Singapore'。