Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达，句子应更简洁自然。例如，“I am currently not working or studying. After graduating from college, I have been looking for a job, and sometimes I do unpaid work to gain experience.”

例: I am currently not working or studying. After graduating from college, I have been looking for a job, and sometimes I do unpaid work to gain experience.

提案: 回答应注意语法和单复数形式，表达更流畅自然。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I am currently working from home, which I really enjoy because I am quite an introverted person. Moreover, it is convenient since I don't have to commute.

提案: 回答应避免重复和口语化表达，句子应更简洁且逻辑清晰。可以具体说明为什么方便和省钱。

例: Yes, definitely. Working from home is convenient because I save time and money by not commuting.

提案: 回答应注意语法和表达准确，避免口语缩写，句子应更完整。

例: No, I would prefer to change my living place, although I still want to work from home.

提案: 回答中应避免语法错误，如“walk”应为“work”，并且表达应更自然流畅。可以具体说明自由职业的优点。

例: I prefer to work as a freelancer because it offers great flexibility and allows me to arrange my own schedule, which is very important for my well-being.

× after I graduated from college, I didn't get a job yet.

✓ after I graduated from college, I haven't got a job yet.

这里使用现在完成时态更合适，因为动作发生在过去并且对现在有影响。'didn't get'是一般过去时，表示动作已经完成，不适合与'yet'连用。

× So I was just trying to finding a job.

✓ So I was just trying to find a job.

动词'try'后面接动词时应使用不带-ing的原形动词，'trying to finding'是不正确的搭配。

× I think I'm a very introvert persons

✓ I think I'm a very introverted person

'persons'是复数形式，但前面用的是单数不定冠词'a'，应改为单数形式'person'。另外，'introvert'应改为形容词'introverted'。

× I'm working from home currently

✓ I'm currently working from home

副词'currently'通常放在动词前面，'working from home currently'的顺序不自然。

× I think it's convenient that we don't have to commute in this form of working.

✓ I think it's convenient that we don't have to commute in this form of work.

'form of working'不自然，通常用'form of work'表示工作方式。

× And I think it's so convenient that we can, we don't have to commute outside and sometimes, you know, don't need to waste so many money.

✓ And I think it's so convenient that we don't have to commute outside and sometimes, you know, don't need to waste so much money.

'so many money'错误，money是不可数名词，应使用'much'。

× I still wanna working from home

✓ I still wanna work from home

'wanna'是'want to'的口语形式，后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词。

× I prefer to walk as a freelancer

✓ I prefer to work as a freelancer

'walk'是'走路'的意思，语境中应为'work'（工作）。

× I think it's really important for my emotion.

✓ I think it's really important for my emotions.

'emotion'通常用复数形式'emotions'表示情感状态，更符合语境。