Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tu respuesta es muy corta y carece de detalles. Para mejorar, intenta dar una respuesta más completa que incluya dónde trabajas y qué haces, usando oraciones completas y vocabulario relevante.

例: I work in the Navy as a communications officer, where I manage important information and coordinate with my team.

提案: La respuesta no es clara y contiene errores. Debes ser más específico y claro al describir tu lugar de trabajo, evitando repeticiones y errores de pronunciación o vocabulario.

例: I work in the Navy, specifically in the logistics department, which handles the supply and transportation of equipment.

提案: Tu respuesta es confusa y contiene muletillas. Para mejorar, responde directamente y explica por qué te gusta el lugar de trabajo usando vocabulario adecuado y oraciones completas.

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and the people are very supportive.

提案: La respuesta es corta y contiene un error (debería ser 'I work', no 'you work'). Para mejorar, responde con más detalles y corrige el error para que sea natural y clara.

例: Yes, I like the place where I work because it offers good opportunities for career growth and learning.

提案: La respuesta es poco clara y gramaticalmente incorrecta. Debes expresar tus planes futuros con oraciones completas y claras, explicando tus objetivos o deseos.

例: In the future, I plan to live and work in London to gain international experience and develop my career.

× I work in the Navy in Planet planet department.

✓ I work in the Navy in the Planet Planet department.

The definite article 'the' is required before specific department names to indicate a particular entity. Here, 'the Planet Planet department' specifies the exact department where the student works.

× Yes, in the good place to work. Umm, because, uh, in very people, uh, beautiful.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work because there are very nice people and it is beautiful.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb, making it incomplete and unclear. The correction adds the subject 'it' and verb 'is' to form a complete sentence and clarifies the meaning by replacing 'in very people' with 'there are very nice people'.

× Yes, I like the place where you work.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work.

The pronoun 'you' incorrectly refers to the examiner instead of the student. The correct pronoun is 'I' to refer to the student's own workplace.

× And my plan? Future is the life in London.

✓ My future plan is to live in London.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. The correction restructures it into a clear and grammatically correct sentence expressing the student's future plan.