Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达重复且不够简洁。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复，并正确使用时态。

例: I am currently preparing for the IRS exam, and I plan to become a student next year.

提案: 回答不清晰且语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的语法和词汇，避免重复。

例: I am not currently working because I am preparing for the IRS exam.

提案: 回答重复且缺乏具体细节，表达不流畅。建议提供具体理由并使用连词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because the people are friendly and the environment is supportive.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，明确表达喜好并给出理由。

例: When I worked, I liked the library because I could read books and relax my mind.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达未来计划并说明原因。

例: In the future, I plan to work in a financial company because I enjoy finance and have enough work experience in this field.

× I am preparing the IRS context and I I am become a student next year.

✓ I am preparing for the IRS context and I will become a student next year.

这里“am become”是错误的时态用法，表示将来时应使用“will become”。另外，“preparing the IRS context”缺少介词，应为“preparing for the IRS context”。

× I am preparing the IRS context and I I am become a student next year.

✓ I am preparing for the IRS context and I will become a student next year.

动词“prepare”后面需要介词“for”，表示为某事做准备。

× I'm not a worker so I am I am account and I didn't go to working because I prepared I's contacts.

✓ I'm not a worker so I am an accountant and I didn't go to work because I was preparing IRS contacts.

“account”应为“accountant”，表示职业名词。动词“go to working”错误，应为“go to work”。“prepared I's contacts”应为“was preparing IRS contacts”，时态和表达错误。

× I'm not a worker so I am I am account and I didn't go to working because I prepared I's contacts.

✓ I'm not a worker so I am an accountant and I didn't go to work because I was preparing IRS contacts.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时态，“prepared”应改为过去进行时“was preparing”，表示当时正在进行的动作。

× Yes, this is a good place to work because they the people are friendly and and friendly and umm.

✓ Yes, this is a good place to work because the people are friendly.

重复使用“friendly”是多余的，应去掉重复词。

× When I were, when I, when I working, I like the place is a, is a. Library because they can read some books and relax my mood and feel.

✓ When I was working, I liked the place which was a library because I could read some books and relax my mood and feelings.

“were”应为“was”与主语“I”一致。动词“like”应使用过去时“liked”。“when I working”应为“when I was working”。

× When I were, when I, when I working, I like the place is a, is a. Library because they can read some books and relax my mood and feel.

✓ When I was working, I liked the place which was a library because I could read some books and relax my mood and feelings.

“they”指代不明，应改为“I”或“people”。

× When I were, when I, when I working, I like the place is a, is a. Library because they can read some books and relax my mood and feel.

✓ When I was working, I liked the place which was a library because I could read some books and relax my mood and feelings.

“relax my mood and feel”表达不准确，应为“relax my mood and feelings”。

× A future works plan to to do a financial company because I like the financial and I have enough experience working of working.

✓ My future work plan is to work for a financial company because I like finance and I have enough work experience.

“A future works plan to to do a financial company”结构错误，应为“My future work plan is to work for a financial company”。“like the financial”应为“like finance”。“experience working of working”表达重复且错误，应为“work experience”。