Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Та илүү тодорхой, грамматик алдаагүй хариулт өгөх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, 'I am an employee at a technology company.' гэж хэлж болно.

例: I am an employee at a technology company.

提案: Хугацааг зөв илэрхийлэх, цагийн алдааг засах хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, 'I have been working at this company for about five years.' гэж хэлэх нь илүү зөв.

例: I have been working at this company for about five years.

提案: 'Worst advantage' гэдэг нь утгагүй байна. Үүний оронд 'best advantage' гэж хэлэх хэрэгтэй. Мөн илүү тодорхой, эерэг үг хэрэглээрэй.

例: Yes, the best advantage is flexible working hours and many benefits for employees.

提案: Асуултанд шууд хариулах, грамматик алдааг засах, илүү тодорхой тайлбар өгөх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, 'Yes, I like my workplace because it provides all necessary facilities, such as a coffee break area.'

例: Yes, I like my workplace because it provides all necessary facilities, such as a coffee break area.

提案: Хэлэх санаагаа илүү тодорхой, грамматик зөв илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, 'I plan to quit my job within the next year because the company is still in the startup phase and many processes are not yet established.'

例: I plan to quit my job within the next year because the company is still in the startup phase and many processes are not yet established.

× I'm employee of technological company.

✓ I'm an employee of a technological company.

The sentence is missing the indefinite articles 'an' before 'employee' and 'a' before 'technological company'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Here, 'employee' and 'company' are singular countable nouns, so 'an' and 'a' are needed respectively.

× Uh, I was working at for about 5 years ago at that company.

✓ Uh, I worked at that company for about 5 years.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'was working' with 'ago' and has misplaced prepositions. When referring to a completed action in the past with a specific time ('5 years ago'), the simple past tense 'worked' is appropriate. Also, 'at for' is incorrect; 'at' is sufficient before the company name.

× Yeah, certainly my worst advantage is flexible time and a lot of benefits for employees. Yeah.

✓ Yeah, certainly my best advantage is flexible time and a lot of benefits for employees.

The word 'worst' is incorrect in this context because the speaker likely means a positive aspect. 'Best' is the correct adjective to express a positive advantage. Using 'worst' contradicts the intended meaning.

× Should certainly our workspace have all needs for employees as a productive? For example, our workspace have coffee break, coffee break.

✓ Our workspace should certainly have all the needs for employees to be productive. For example, our workspace has a coffee break area.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and pronoun usage. 'Should certainly' is misplaced; it should be 'should certainly have'. Also, 'all needs' should be 'all the needs' to specify. 'Have coffee break' is incorrect; it should be 'has a coffee break area' to indicate a facility. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I actually need quite my job for about next one year because my work and my company is a little bit start off practice and all things and all process decisions.

✓ I actually need to quit my job in about one year because my work and my company are still in the startup phase and all processes and decisions are just beginning.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'need quite' should be 'need to quit'; 'for about next one year' should be 'in about one year'; 'my company is a little bit start off practice' is unclear and corrected to 'my company are still in the startup phase'; subject-verb agreement corrected from 'is' to 'are' for 'work and company'; and the sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.