Work— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
I've been working for almost 10 years when I graduated from my college. I have been an extra teacher for five years in an in an institution. I also been a teacher in kindergarten.
試験官
Where do you work?>
受験者
Now I do a part time job at home to teach students English because it was very convenient for me to teach them. I do not need to spend much time on. Commutation.
試験官
Is it a good place to work?
受験者
Actually, it is a good place to work. It's very convenient for me to walk at home because I do not like to spend spend much time on commuting. So it was efficient efficient and I also did not need to. To go anywhere.
試験官
Would you like the place where you work?
受験者
Yes, I'd like the place where I work because it was very close to my home so I don't have to spend much time commuting. This saves me a lot of energy and makes me makes my work day more efficient. Besides, I can easily take short breaks.
試験官
What are your future work plans?
受験者
I plan to work at home as usual because I I can earn money to make me living and also it was it was.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答时时态混乱，表达不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致，并避免重复。
例: I have been working for almost 10 years since I graduated from college. For five years, I worked as a part-time teacher at an institution, and I also taught in a kindergarten.
Where do you work?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，且单词拼写错误（commutation应为commuting）。建议使用连贯的句子并注意拼写。
例: Currently, I work part-time from home teaching English to students because it is very convenient and saves me a lot of commuting time.
Is it a good place to work?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答重复且语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
例: Yes, it is a good place to work because I can work from home, which saves me time and energy since I don't have to commute.
Would you like the place where you work?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答较好，但时态不一致，且有重复词汇。建议保持时态一致，避免重复，并适当使用连接词。
例: Yes, I like working at home because it is very close to my house, so I don't spend much time commuting. This saves me energy and makes my workday more efficient. Besides, I can easily take short breaks.
What are your future work plans?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，使用正确的语法，并清楚表达未来计划。
例: In the future, I plan to continue working from home because it allows me to earn a living while managing my time effectively.
文法
× I've been working for almost 10 years when I graduated from my college.
✓ I had been working for almost 10 years when I graduated from my college.
这里描述的是过去某一时间点之前已经持续的动作，应该用过去完成时，表示在毕业之前已经工作了近10年。
× I also been a teacher in kindergarten.
✓ I have also been a teacher in kindergarten.
这里缺少助动词have，正确的现在完成时结构是have been，表示过去到现在的经历。
× I do not need to spend much time on. Commutation.
✓ I do not need to spend much time commuting.
动词spend后面直接跟时间和动名词，不能用介词on，commutation应改为commuting，表示通勤。
× So it was efficient efficient and I also did not need to. To go anywhere.
✓ So it is efficient and I also do not need to go anywhere.
这里描述的是现在的情况，时态应为现在时，且不需要句号断开句子。
× Yes, I'd like the place where I work because it was very close to my home so I don't have to spend much time commuting.
✓ Yes, I like the place where I work because it is very close to my home so I don't have to spend much time commuting.
表达现在的喜好和事实，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时。
× This saves me a lot of energy and makes me makes my work day more efficient.
✓ This saves me a lot of energy and makes my work day more efficient.
句子中重复了makes me，应该删除多余部分。
× I plan to work at home as usual because I I can earn money to make me living and also it was it was.
✓ I plan to work at home as usual because I can earn money to make my living.
句子中有重复词汇且时态混乱，应该用一般现在时表达计划，且表达“make my living”而非“make me living”。
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