Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，缺乏连贯性。建议练习简单句型，直接回答问题，并用完整句子表达，例如说明你是学生并且每天努力学习。

例: I am a student and I study hard every day to improve my skills.

提案: 回答不明确且语法错误较多。建议直接回答没有工作，并说明你是学生，学习很努力。使用连贯的句子表达。

例: Actually, I don't have a job because I am a student. I study hard every day to prepare for my future.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，语法和表达有误。建议明确说明工作地点的优点，使用连贯句子，并避免重复。

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because the salary is high and sometimes there are bonuses or subsidies.

提案: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议直接表达喜欢工作地点靠近家乡的原因，使用连贯句子。

例: I prefer to work near my hometown because I feel happier when I am close to my family.

提案: 回答不清晰，语法和表达错误较多。建议明确表达未来工作计划，说明想在哪个领域或公司工作，并用完整句子表达。

例: In the future, I plan to work in a good company in China because there are many opportunities for workers.

× Amateur certainly students an never have a work.

✓ I am certainly a student and never have a job.

这里'students'an'work'的使用不正确。'students'应为单数形式'student'，'work'前应使用'job'表示工作。应注意单复数和词汇搭配。

× I have a. Good study every day and. Dairy.

✓ I study well every day and keep a diary.

句子结构混乱，断句不合理。应将断句合并，表达清晰。'Good study'应改为'study well'，'Dairy'应为'diary'。

× Actually I don't have a work Anne with an EM student.

✓ Actually, I don't have a job and I am a student.

'have a work'应为'have a job'，'Anne with an EM student'语法错误，应为'and I am a student'。介词和连词使用错误。

× Uh, I have come. Study every day I'm so hard is because I I have many listen to have to study.

✓ I come to study every day. I work hard because I have many things to listen to and study.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。应调整句子顺序，补充缺失成分，使表达完整。

× He have a high salary.

✓ He has a high salary.

主语'He'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'has'，而不是'have'。

× And sometime is the campaign can give me a some. Subsidy.

✓ And sometimes the company can give me some subsidy.

'sometime'应为复数形式'sometimes'，'campaign'应为'company'，'a some'错误，改为'some'。注意单复数和冠词使用。

× I like some place near my home, my home town 'cause if I stay the far from my home and so sad and.

✓ I like some places near my home, my hometown, because if I stay far from my home, I feel very sad.

'some place'应为复数'some places'，'my home town'应连写为'hometown'，'the far'应为'far'，代词和词组使用不当。

× I like some place near my home, my home town 'cause if I stay the far from my home and so sad and.

✓ I like some places near my home, my hometown, because if I stay far from my home, I feel very sad.

'stay the far from'中介词'the'使用错误，应去掉。

× Yeah, it's in play.

✓ Yes, I have a plan.

'it's in play'表达不清，句子结构错误，应改为'I have a plan'。

× I want to work. To solve. Of China now because there have many company.

✓ I want to work to develop China now because there are many companies.

'to solve of China'表达错误，应为'to develop China'或类似表达；'there have'应为'there are'，'company'应为复数'companies'。介词和动词使用错误。

× because there have many company. Good for worker and. Is so good.

✓ because there are many companies good for workers and it is very good.

'company'应为复数'companies'，'worker'应为复数'workers'，句子缺少主语，需补充。