Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit short. Try to add a little more detail to make it more natural and effective. For example, you can mention what you are studying or your current focus as a student.

例: Currently, I am a student studying computer science at university. I am focusing on improving my programming skills and preparing for my future career.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple and correct sentences to explain where you work and what you do.

例: I work part-time near my home at an English language center where I help students practice speaking.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and correcting grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because it has a peaceful environment. Moreover, my colleagues are friendly, and the students are respectful. I have been working there for the past two years, and I enjoy it.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and minor errors. Try to use linking words and avoid repeating the same ideas. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure.

例: Yes, I like the place because the environment is peaceful and the people are kind and respectful towards everyone.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and try to make your sentences more fluent.

例: In the future, I plan to study in Germany and work part-time there. I am considering a teaching job because I enjoy helping others learn, and I am looking forward to this opportunity.

× I work as a part time job.

✓ I work a part-time job.

The phrase 'work as a part time job' is incorrect because 'work' is a verb and 'part-time job' is a noun phrase. The correct expression is 'work a part-time job' without 'as'. Also, 'part-time' should be hyphenated as it is a compound adjective.

× I don't get me.

✓ I don't understand.

The sentence 'I don't get me' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I don't understand'. 'Get' can mean 'understand' informally, but 'get me' is incorrect here.

× Near my home where I Peach. English language.

✓ Near my home where I teach English.

The sentence is fragmented and contains a wrong word 'Peach' instead of 'teach'. The corrected sentence is 'Near my home where I teach English.' to make it complete and meaningful.

× And colleagues are very friendly and the students are very respectful.

✓ The colleagues are very friendly and the students are very respectful.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and not preferred in formal speech. Also, 'colleagues' needs a definite article 'The' to specify which colleagues are being talked about.

× And I'm working there as from a past two years.

✓ And I've been working there for the past two years.

The phrase 'as from a past two years' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'for' to indicate duration, and the present perfect continuous tense 'I've been working' fits the context of an action continuing up to now.

× people there are so kindly, so kind. Not kindly, I mean they are kind

✓ People there are so kind.

'Kindly' is an adverb meaning 'in a kind manner', but here the adjective 'kind' is needed to describe 'people'. The repetition and correction in the sentence indicate confusion between 'kind' and 'kindly'.

× I'm looking forward for that.

✓ I'm looking forward to that.

The correct preposition after 'looking forward' is 'to', not 'for'. The phrase should be 'looking forward to' something.