Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. You should directly answer the question by stating whether you work or study, using correct verb forms and complete sentences. Try to keep your answer natural and relevant.

例: I am currently a student at university, studying computer science.

提案: You did not provide an answer. Always try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details if necessary.

例: I work at a local bookstore in downtown Toronto, where I help customers find books and manage inventory.

提案: Your answer is too brief and lacks explanation. Provide reasons or examples to support your opinion, and use linking words to make your response coherent.

例: I don't think it's a good place to work because the environment is quite noisy, and the management is not very supportive.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not address the question. You should express your opinion clearly and provide reasons or examples to support it.

例: I would like to work there because it offers flexible hours and a friendly atmosphere.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. You should clearly state your future work plans and provide some details or reasons to enrich your answer.

例: In the future, I plan to find a job related to marketing because I enjoy creative work and communicating with people.

× I currently doing your workout.

✓ I am currently doing your workout.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. In English, the present continuous tense requires the verb 'to be' (am/is/are) followed by the verb with -ing form. The correct form is 'I am currently doing your workout.'

× Play now.

✓ I am playing now.

The sentence lacks a subject and auxiliary verb, making it incomplete. To express an action happening now, the present continuous tense is used, which requires the subject and the verb 'to be' plus the -ing form of the verb. The corrected sentence is 'I am playing now.'

× My bills. Remind.

✓ I need to pay my bills. Please remind me.

The original response is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. It does not clearly answer the question about future work plans. A complete sentence with subject, verb, and object is necessary. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct response.