Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明身份和专业，避免多余或错误的词汇。

例: I am currently a second-year university student majoring in International Business and Languages.

提案: 回答没有直接回答问题，且内容重复。建议直接回答工作地点或学习地点，并补充相关细节。

例: I study at a university in Suzhou, which is a beautiful city with a rich cultural heritage.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，语法和词汇使用不当。建议用完整句子描述工作环境，使用恰当的形容词。

例: Yes, it is a great place to work because the atmosphere is warm and the people are very kind.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用连贯的句子描述喜欢的原因，注意时态和词汇准确。

例: Yes, I like my workplace because the environment is friendly and supportive. My colleagues are always willing to help me when I face difficulties, and my leaders understand my needs.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构简单。建议丰富细节，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: In the future, I plan to work for a large international company that collaborates with people from different countries, as I enjoy cross-cultural communication and teamwork.

× I am assumed right now I am a university student in grades two and my major is international business with a language.

✓ I am currently a university student in my second year, and my major is international business with a language focus.

句子中使用了不正确的时态表达“am assumed”，应使用现在进行时或现在时态来描述当前状态。建议使用“am currently”来表达现在的状态，更符合英语表达习惯。

× I am a university student in grades two

✓ I am a university student in my second year

“grades two”用法不正确，英语中通常用“in my second year”来表达大学二年级。

× my major is international business with a language.

✓ my major is international business with a language focus.

“with a language”表达不完整，建议补充“focus”使表达更完整和准确。

× Yes, uh, the environment here is really good with warm atmosphere and kindly there's.

✓ Yes, the environment here is really good, with a warm atmosphere and kindness.

原句结构混乱，“kindly there's”不符合英语表达，应调整为“with a warm atmosphere and kindness”使句子通顺。

× Yes, I do like to place that had word because the environment is very friendly and supportive.

✓ Yes, I do like the place where I work because the environment is very friendly and supportive.

“to place that had word”是错误的表达，应为“the place where I work”，指代明确且语法正确。

× My colleagues are usually very willing to help me when I met difficulties in working and my leaders.

✓ My colleagues are usually very willing to help me when I meet difficulties at work, and my leaders

“when I met difficulties”时态错误，应使用一般现在时“when I meet difficulties”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× My colleagues are usually very willing to help me when I met difficulties in working and my leaders. Usually understand what I need and paid.

✓ My colleagues are usually very willing to help me when I meet difficulties at work, and my leaders usually understand what I need and support me.

句子结构不完整，“my leaders. Usually understand”应合并为一句，且“paid”用词不当，应改为“support me”或类似表达。

× My future work plan is working for a big cross-border international company which can cooperate with people from different countries.

✓ My future work plan is to work for a big cross-border international company that cooperates with people from different countries.

“My future work plan is working”中“working”用法不当，计划后应接不定式“to work”。此外，“which can cooperate”改为“that cooperates”更自然。