Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點不自然，語法錯誤和用詞不當影響了表達。建議你直接回答問題，並用正確的語法介紹自己和專業，避免冗長且不清楚的描述。

例: I'm a sophomore at National Taiwan Normal University, majoring in Earth Science. I study subjects like oceanography, meteorology, geophysics, geology, and astronomy.

提案: 回答不清楚且語法錯誤嚴重，建議你直接回答問題，說明你在哪裡工作或學習，並用完整句子表達。

例: I am currently a student at National Taiwan Normal University, where I major in Earth Science.

提案: 回答有點冗長且語法不正確，建議你用更自然的句子表達你的看法，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

例: Yes, I think National Taiwan Normal University is a great place to study because it offers a variety of courses that I can choose from.

提案: 回答不連貫且語法錯誤多，建議你用完整且連貫的句子表達你的喜好，並使用連接詞使句子更自然。

例: Yes, definitely. I like my school because it provides many courses, and I can choose the ones I love to study.

提案: 回答基本清楚，但語法和用詞可以更自然。建議你用更流暢的句子表達你的想法。

例: I haven't thought about my future work plans yet because I'm only a sophomore, so I think it's too early to decide.

× I'm a sophomore at National Taiwan Normal University Ann. I study Earth science who's was learning about oceanography, metrology, geophysics, geology and astronomy.

✓ I'm a sophomore at National Taiwan Normal University. I study Earth science, which involves learning about oceanography, meteorology, geophysics, geology, and astronomy.

The pronoun 'who's' is incorrectly used to refer to 'Earth science'. The correct relative pronoun is 'which' for things. Also, 'was learning' is incorrect here; the present tense 'involves learning' fits better to describe current study. Additionally, 'metrology' should be 'meteorology'.

× Now I must you then, as national Taiwan normal university Ann I major in. Earth science, which is learning about the Earth.

✓ Now I am a student at National Taiwan Normal University, and I major in Earth science, which is the study of the Earth.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I must you then' is incorrect and likely a misstatement. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure errors.

× I think National Taiwan Normal University is a good school or that have a variety of courses that I can choose what I want to learn.

✓ I think National Taiwan Normal University is a good school that has a variety of courses from which I can choose what I want to learn.

The phrase 'that have' is incorrect because 'school' is singular and requires 'has'. Also, 'or that' is incorrect; 'that' is the correct conjunction here.

× Men, definitely yes, because it's. Provide a lot of courses and I can choose. The courses that I love, that one to learn, so I love. My school.

✓ Yes, definitely, because it provides a lot of courses and I can choose the courses that I love and want to learn, so I love my school.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect verb forms. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with 'it'. Also, sentence fragments are combined for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I haven't thought about it because now I'm a sophomore, so I think consider this question is too early.

✓ I haven't thought about it because now I'm a sophomore, so I think considering this question is too early.

The phrase 'I think consider this question' is incorrect. The gerund form 'considering' is needed after 'think' to express the idea properly.