Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免多余内容，并注意语法正确。

例: I am currently a student at Hong Kong Baptist University, majoring in Discovery and Modernization of Chinese Traditional Medicine.

提案: 回答不完整且句子断裂，缺少连贯性。建议用完整句子回答，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I used to work at the Changing In Situ department of the Chinese Academy of Science, which is located in Guangdong province.

提案: 回答较好，但有小的语法错误和词汇使用不当。建议注意冠词和形容词的正确使用，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, it is a good place to work. I enjoy working there because the environment is very professional and inspiring.

提案: 回答重复且时态不一致。建议避免重复内容，并保持时态一致，使表达更准确。

例: Yes, I like the place where I work because the environment is very professional and inspiring.

提案: 回答不相关且含糊，未直接回答未来工作计划。建议明确表达未来职业目标，并提供具体细节。

例: In the future, I plan to work in research that combines traditional Chinese medicine with modern scientific techniques to develop new treatments.

× Are you sure were also biological technician? But now I am a study.

✓ Are you sure you are also a biological technician? But now I am a student.

句子中缺少主语you，且study应为student，表示学生身份。现在时态中，主语和动词要匹配，且名词拼写正确。

× I used to work at Changing in situ of Chinese Academy of Science.

✓ I used to work at the Changing in situ of the Chinese Academy of Sciences.

机构名称前需要加定冠词the，且Chinese Academy of Science应为Chinese Academy of Sciences，表示中国科学院。

× Which is located in Guangdong province.

✓ It is located in Guangdong province.

句子缺少主语，使用which引导的从句不完整，应改为完整句子。

× I enjoy working there because their environment is very professional an inspiring.

✓ I enjoy working there because their environment is very professional and inspiring.

连接词and拼写错误为an，应改正。

× I enjoyed working there because the environment is very professional and inspiring.

✓ I enjoy working there because the environment is very professional and inspiring.

回答当前工作感受，应使用现在时态，enjoyed为过去时，不符合语境。

× I want to purchase the PHTD Greed because I am very interested in combining traditional knowledge with modern science.

✓ I want to pursue the PHTD degree because I am very interested in combining traditional knowledge with modern science.

purchase（购买）用错，应为pursue（攻读），Greed拼写错误，应为degree（学位）。