Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some irrelevant or incorrect information, such as 'theories of depression' and 'colors in the field of political sense'. To improve, focus on directly answering the question with clear and relevant details about your studies. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I am a student studying political science at Shahjalal University of Science and Technology. I find this subject fascinating because it helps me understand how governments operate and how policies affect society. Additionally, I learn about international relations and political theories, which broaden my perspective.

提案: Your answer is vague and lacks clarity. You should specify the type of office and your job role clearly. Avoid uncertain phrases like 'I think'. Use linking words to add supporting details and make your answer more coherent.

例: I work at a nearby IT company that specialises in data security. My role involves encryption, which means I help protect sensitive information from unauthorized access.

提案: Your answer has good points but is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. To improve, complete your sentences, use correct grammar, and organise your ideas logically with linking words. Provide specific reasons why the workplace is good.

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because the office provides comfortable facilities such as air conditioning and reliable Wi-Fi. These amenities make the working environment pleasant and help employees stay productive.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is very relaxing and the employees are friendly. This positive atmosphere makes it one of my favourite places to be.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains errors. To improve, complete your sentences, use correct grammar, and clearly explain your future plans with reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I have future plans. I want to work in a foreign country because gaining international experience will help me develop my skills. This experience will be valuable for my career growth in the future.

× This subject is quite interesting for me because I can learn many theories of depression.

✓ This subject is quite interesting to me because I can learn many theories of depression.

The correct preposition to express interest towards a subject is 'to' rather than 'for'. Therefore, 'interesting to me' is the proper phrase.

× This colors in the field of political sense.

✓ This relates to the field of political science.

The phrase 'colors in the field of political sense' is unclear and uses incorrect prepositions and vocabulary. The intended meaning is better expressed as 'relates to the field of political science'.

× Also, I can learn many political efforts around the wall.

✓ Also, I can learn about many political efforts around the world.

The preposition 'about' is needed after 'learn' to indicate the subject matter. Additionally, 'wall' is incorrect; the correct word is 'world'.

× So I think I am doing encryption.

✓ So I think I am doing encryption work.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'work' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× There are AC.

✓ There is AC.

'AC' (air conditioning) is uncountable and singular, so the singular verb 'is' should be used instead of 'are'.

× When we feel hott we can turn on easy.

✓ When we feel hot, we can turn it on easily.

The adjective 'hott' is misspelled; it should be 'hot'. Also, 'easy' is an adjective, but here an adverb 'easily' is needed to modify the verb 'turn on'. Additionally, 'it' should be included as the object.

× There is a Wi-Fi services so we can go through Internet an all these facilities are given by the office so I.

✓ There is Wi-Fi service, so we can access the Internet, and all these facilities are provided by the office.

'Wi-Fi services' is incorrect; 'Wi-Fi service' is uncountable and singular. 'Go through Internet' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'access the Internet'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× Yes, I like the place where I am working becaused this please. Is so much relaxing and all the employees are so good so I think it is the one of my most provide places place.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I am working because this place is very relaxing and all the employees are very good, so I think it is one of my most preferred places.

'Becaused' is incorrect; the correct word is 'because'. 'Please' should be 'place'. 'So much relaxing' should be 'very relaxing'. 'Most provide places place' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'most preferred places'. The sentence needed rephrasing for clarity and correctness.

× My future plan is to do job in foreign country becaused by working importing country I can gain so much experience that I can apply it in my future.

✓ My future plan is to work in a foreign country because by working in an important country I can gain a lot of experience that I can apply in my future.

'Do job' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'work'. 'Becaused' should be 'because'. 'Importing country' is likely a mistake for 'important country'. Articles 'a' and 'an' are needed before 'foreign country' and 'important country'. 'So much experience' is better expressed as 'a lot of experience'.