Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You should answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you work or study, then add a brief detail if necessary. Keep your answer natural and relevant.

例: I am currently a student at university, studying computer science. I find my courses very interesting and challenging.

提案: Again, avoid repeating the examiner's question. Provide a direct answer with a topic sentence stating your workplace, followed by a supporting detail to enrich your response. Use linking words if you add more information.

例: I work at a local bookstore in the city centre. It is a quiet place, and I enjoy helping customers find books they like.

提案: Your answer is very brief and slightly unnatural. Instead, say 'It is a good place to work' and add specific reasons why you think so. Use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and my colleagues are supportive. Moreover, the working hours are flexible, which suits me well.

提案: Do not repeat the question. Instead, answer it directly with a clear opinion and supporting details. Use natural language and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is comfortable and I have good relationships with my coworkers.

提案: You should answer the question about your own future work plans rather than repeating or asking the examiner. Provide a clear statement about your plans and add some details to explain your goals.

例: In the future, I plan to become a software engineer. I am currently gaining experience through internships to prepare for this career.

× Do you work or are you a student?

✓ I am a student.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. The sentence structure is incorrect as it does not provide an answer. The student should respond with a statement indicating their status, such as 'I am a student.'

× Where do you work?

✓ I work at a bank.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. The sentence structure is incorrect as it does not provide an answer. The student should respond with a statement indicating their workplace, such as 'I work at a bank.'

× It is a good place for work.

✓ It is a good place to work.

The phrase 'a good place for work' is less natural in this context. The correct preposition is 'to' when expressing purpose or suitability, so 'a good place to work' is the appropriate expression.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. The sentence structure is incorrect as it does not provide an answer. The student should respond affirmatively or negatively, such as 'Yes, I like the place where I work.'

× But your future work plan?

✓ My future work plan is to become a manager.

The student repeated the examiner's question in an incomplete and incorrect form. The sentence lacks a verb and proper structure. The student should provide a complete answer, such as 'My future work plan is to become a manager.'