Party— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and limit length to about 2–3 concise sentences. Use linking words (e.g., because, so, therefore) correctly and provide one specific example to support your point.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy parties because they help me relax and bond with friends. For example, at my last party we listened to live music and danced together, which helped me forget my stress and have a great time.

Sugerencia: Correct tense and reduce filler words. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., only, usually, for example). Remove repeated fragments and unnecessary hesitations.

Ejemplo: I didn’t have parties often as a child; we only celebrated on special occasions. For example, at birthday parties we had lots of food, gift-opening sessions and simple game stations that made the day fun.

Sugerencia: Make the response more concise and correct grammar and pronouns. Use past tense consistently, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail about your role or the result. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I organised a surprise birthday party for a close friend. I invited her classmates, arranged the cake and presents, and booked a cosy café; she was very surprised and said it was an unforgettable evening.

× Yes, very party because it's a good way to bond with my friends and it's also one of the way for me to relax myself and reduce my stress.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy parties because they're a good way to bond with my friends and they're also one of the ways for me to relax and reduce my stress.

The sentence uses incorrect quantifiers and singular/plural forms: 'very party' is incorrect (needs an adverb and verb), 'one of the way' should be 'one of the ways' (plural after 'one of the'), and 'relax myself' is unnatural in English; use 'relax'. Suggestion: use 'really enjoy parties' and ensure nouns after 'one of' are plural. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× As in a party we always immerse ourselves in the music and dance with the music, so it is really rewarding.

✓ At a party we always immerse ourselves in the music and dance to the music, so it is really rewarding.

Use of preposition/article: 'As in a party' is unnatural; 'at a party' is correct. Also 'dance with the music' is non-idiomatic; 'dance to the music' or 'dance along to the music' is correct. Suggestion: use common prepositions with events ('at a party') and the collocation 'dance to the music'. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× When I was a kid I don't usually have a party.

✓ When I was a kid I didn't usually have parties.

The time clause 'When I was a kid' sets the past tense, so 'don't usually have' should be past simple 'didn't usually have'. Also 'a party' is better as plural 'parties' when speaking generally. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time frame and use plural for general repeated events. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× We only have a party during the special occasions for example like the birthday party for my siblings or even my friends.

✓ We only had parties on special occasions, for example birthdays for my siblings or my friends.

Consistency with past tense and pluralization: 'We only have a party' should be 'We only had parties' to match past timeframe. 'During the special occasions' should be 'on special occasions' (preposition choice). Remove redundant words 'for example like'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct prepositions for occasions ('on special occasions'). Grammar problem type ID: 6

× So we will be we will have like a lot of food day and beside this we also have the umm gift sessions where we where the people will open the gift and then we will have a game stations which make it really fun.

✓ So we would have a lot of food, and besides that we also had gift sessions where people opened presents, and then we had game stations which made it really fun.

Multiple issues: tense mismatch and repetition ('will be we will have') corrected to past conditional/past habitual 'would have' or 'had' to match context; 'beside this' -> 'besides that'; 'the umm gift sessions where we where the people will open the gift' has redundant words and wrong tense; use past 'people opened presents'; 'game stations' plural requires 'made' (past) to agree. Suggestion: remove fillers, avoid repetition, keep tense consistent, use plural forms and correct prepositions. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, I used to organise a surprise birthday party for my friends where I I gather all of her other friends and together we give us a surprise by giving her birthday cakes and also present which make the day really unforgettable.

✓ Yes, I used to organize surprise birthday parties for my friends where I gathered all of their other friends, and together we surprised her by giving her a birthday cake and presents which made the day really unforgettable.

Tense and agreement: 'used to organise' sets past habitual so verbs must be past: 'gather' -> 'gathered', 'give us a surprise' -> 'surprised her' (pronoun corrections), 'birthday cakes and also present' should be 'a birthday cake and presents' (singular/plural and article), and 'which make' -> 'which made' for past. Also 'her other friends' fits 'their' referring to friend. Suggestion: keep past tense for habitual past actions, match pronouns, and ensure noun number and articles are correct. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× And we did it in a very special cafe and the environment is amazing.

✓ We did it in a very special cafe and the atmosphere was amazing.

Pronoun/tense and word choice: 'the environment is amazing' is awkward for an event in the past; use past tense 'was' and 'atmosphere' or 'environment' with correct tense. Also starting with 'And' is informal; fine in speech but in corrected writing 'We did it...' is sufficient. Suggestion: match tense and choose the collocation 'atmosphere' for events. Grammar problem type ID: 12