Party— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'parties' and improve grammar by saying 'a good way' instead of 'the good way'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' or 'as'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy parties such as birthday celebrations, weddings, and school farewell events because they are a good way to relax and unwind from a hectic schedule. Moreover, they provide a great chance to meet new friends and socialize.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use correct grammar such as 'when I was a kid' and 'I frequently enjoyed parties'. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'. Try to provide more specific details and use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas.

Ejemplo: When I was a kid, I frequently enjoyed parties such as wedding receptions, birthday parties, and school farewell events. However, in my family, we usually had small gatherings.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good content but needs improvement in grammar and vocabulary. Use correct tense like 'I have organized' and say 'I am good at managing party events'. Also, avoid repetition and add linking words like 'for example' to clarify your point.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have organized parties because I am good at managing event arrangements. For example, when I was in 12th grade, I successfully organized the school farewell event, which was a great achievement for me.

× Yes, I really like the parties like birthday party, wedding parties and school farewell events.

✓ Yes, I really like parties like birthday parties, wedding parties and school farewell events.

The word 'parties' is a plural countable noun and should not be preceded by 'the' when speaking generally. Also, 'birthday party' should be plural to match the list of multiple events. Use plural forms to indicate general preference for such events.

× It is the good way to relax and unwind to ourselves from hectic schedule and it is good chance to meet new friend and socialize.

✓ It is a good way to relax and unwind ourselves from a hectic schedule and it is a good chance to meet new friends and socialize.

The phrase 'to ourselves' is incorrect; 'unwind ourselves' is the correct reflexive form. Also, 'the good way' should be 'a good way' as it is not a specific known way. 'Hectic schedule' needs an article 'a' before it. 'Good chance' also requires 'a'. 'New friend' should be plural 'new friends' to match the general meaning.

× When I was kid I enjoyed frequently party like wedding reception, birthday party and school farewell events.

✓ When I was a kid, I frequently enjoyed parties like wedding receptions, birthday parties and school farewell events.

The phrase 'When I was kid' is missing the article 'a'. 'Enjoyed frequently party' is incorrect word order; 'frequently enjoyed parties' is correct. Also, 'party' should be plural to match the list of events. 'Wedding reception' should be plural to match the list.

× But uh at my family there were small gather.

✓ But uh, in my family there was a small gathering.

The phrase 'at my family' should be 'in my family'. 'There were small gather' is incorrect; 'gather' is a verb or noun but here 'gathering' (noun) is needed with an article 'a'. Also, 'there was' is correct for singular 'gathering'.

× Yes, I had organized a party because I am well to manage a party events.

✓ Yes, I have organized a party because I am good at managing party events.

The past perfect 'had organized' is incorrect here; present perfect 'have organized' fits better as the experience is relevant now. 'I am well to manage' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I am good at managing'. 'Party events' is plural, so 'a' should be removed.

× When I was 12 standard, I organized the school farewell events successfully.

✓ When I was in 12th standard, I organized the school farewell events successfully.

The phrase 'When I was 12 standard' is missing the preposition 'in' and the ordinal number '12th' is standard usage. The rest of the sentence is correct.