Party— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I would love and I love all this" and use correct grammar such as "what type it is" should be "what type it is" or better "what type it is". Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like parties, especially picnic parties with close friends or tea parties in the evening. These types of gatherings are enjoyable and relaxing for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to respond directly and clearly with a topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Also, correct grammar mistakes like "call my invite" should be "invite". Avoid redundancy such as "when I was a kid" repeated twice.

Ejemplo: I didn't have parties very often as a child. However, I used to celebrate my birthday by inviting friends, cousins, and relatives to join the celebration.

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but can be improved by using consistent verb tenses and linking words to make it more coherent. For example, "I cook" should be "I cooked" and "We dance" should be "We danced". Also, try to avoid minor grammar errors and use more precise vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I organized a Christmas party last year and invited 25 friends. I cooked various dishes contributed by my friends so everyone could enjoy. We danced, played music, and had a bonfire, which made the event memorable and enjoyable.

× Yes I like parties and it also depends what types it is.

✓ Yes, I like parties and it also depends on what type it is.

The phrase 'depends what types it is' is incorrect because 'depends' requires the preposition 'on' to link to the object. Also, 'types' should be singular 'type' to agree with 'it'. The correct phrase is 'depends on what type it is.'

× Yes I like parties and it also depends what types it is.

✓ Yes, I like parties and it also depends on what type it is.

The word 'types' is plural but refers to a singular subject 'it'. To maintain agreement, 'types' should be singular 'type'.

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

The question is about frequency, so 'parties' plural is more appropriate than 'a party' singular to reflect multiple occasions.

× I did not have the party quite often as a kid, but I do remember the party that I used to have when I was a kid was the birthday party where we would call my invite, my friends and my cousins and my relatives to celebrate my birthday.

✓ I did not have parties quite often as a kid, but I do remember the party that I used to have when I was a kid was the birthday party where we would invite my friends, my cousins, and my relatives to celebrate my birthday.

'The party' should be plural 'parties' to indicate multiple events. Also, 'call my invite' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'invite my friends'.

× ...where we would call my invite, my friends and my cousins and my relatives to celebrate my birthday.

✓ ...where we would invite my friends, my cousins, and my relatives to celebrate my birthday.

The verb 'call' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'invite' when referring to asking people to come to a party.

× Yes, I have organised a Christmas party last year where I invited my friends.

✓ Yes, I organised a Christmas party last year where I invited my friends.

The phrase 'last year' indicates a specific past time, so the simple past tense 'organised' should be used instead of present perfect 'have organised'. Present perfect is not used with definite past time expressions.

× We were 25 in number, so I cook different kinds of cuisines from my friends so we could enjoy.

✓ We were 25 in number, so I cooked different kinds of cuisines from my friends so we could enjoy.

The verb 'cook' should be in past tense 'cooked' to agree with the past time frame indicated by 'were 25' and the context of the party last year.

× We dance, we played music and we also had a bonfire.

✓ We danced, we played music and we also had a bonfire.

The verb 'dance' should be in past tense 'danced' to maintain consistency with the past tense narrative.