History— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct tense and grammar. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I studied history during my school years, especially in the 10th standard. After 12th grade, I had the option to choose subjects, but I opted for economics instead of history because of my interest in humanities.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and a bit confusing. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repeating phrases. Also, try to be more specific about your learning methods.

Ejemplo: I usually learn history by memorizing important dates and events. Additionally, I practice writing them down, which helps me remember better since I find memorizing dates challenging.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Make sure to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, provide more specific benefits to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: Learning history helps us understand the background of our country and culture. Moreover, it allows us to stay connected with our roots and learn valuable lessons from the past.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, learning history is very important. It helps us stay connected with our roots and understand our country's background. Furthermore, studying history teaches us valuable lessons from the past.

× Well I have studied history in my school times.

✓ Well, I studied history in my school days.

The phrase 'school times' is incorrect; 'school days' is the appropriate expression. Also, 'have studied' is acceptable but 'studied' fits better with the past reference to school days.

× I learn history in my 10th standard because after 12th it was our choices.

✓ I learned history in my 10th standard because after 12th it was our choice.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past time frame. Also, 'choices' should be singular 'choice' to agree with 'it was'.

× Then I chose not to choose history because I am having a humanities background.

✓ Then I chose not to choose history because I had a humanities background.

The phrase 'I am having' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'I had' to match the past context.

× I have chose economics over history.

✓ I chose economics over history.

The verb 'have chose' is incorrect; the correct past participle is 'have chosen' or simply past tense 'chose'. Here, 'I chose' is appropriate.

× If I talk about how I have learned history, I have learned history by remembering dates or sometimes practicing them by writing as I have found as I found learning dates in history very difficult.

✓ If I talk about how I learned history, I learned history by remembering dates or sometimes practicing them by writing as I found learning dates in history very difficult.

The use of present perfect 'have learned' is inconsistent with the past context; simple past 'learned' is appropriate. Also, 'I have found as I found' is redundant; 'I found' suffices.

× History helps us to know the historical backgrounds of our country and our cultures.

✓ History helps us know the historical backgrounds of our country and our culture.

The phrase 'helps us to know' can be simplified to 'helps us know'. Also, 'cultures' should be singular 'culture' to match 'our country'.

× History also helps to stay connected with our roots and.

✓ History also helps us stay connected with our roots.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'helps to stay connected'. Adding 'us' and removing the trailing 'and' completes the sentence.

× Guess in my perspective, learning history is quite important.

✓ I guess from my perspective, learning history is quite important.

The phrase 'Guess in my perspective' is incorrect; 'I guess from my perspective' is the correct expression.

× It can helps us to stay connected with our roots and it also helps to understand the historical background of our country and cultures.

✓ It can help us stay connected with our roots and it also helps us understand the historical background of our country and culture.

After modal verb 'can', the base form 'help' is used, not 'helps'. Also, 'helps to understand' is better as 'helps us understand'. 'Cultures' should be singular 'culture'.

× Moreover, studying history also helps to learn the valuable lessons from our past.

✓ Moreover, studying history also helps us learn valuable lessons from our past.

The phrase 'helps to learn' is better expressed as 'helps us learn'. The article 'the' before 'valuable lessons' is unnecessary here.